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faizkhosa Sunday, March 18, 2012 09:40 PM

Beggars are not choosers (plz chek and comment)
 
Beggars are not choosers.
the maxim under reference brings home to reader a vital philosophy of life. It is the psyche of man that when he starts begging it is difficult to change his psyche. Countries, which are dependent upon donors have no choice of their own. The donors are free to do whatsoever they seem better and whenever they think their donation is not in their interest they surely will stop the donation and affected country has no right to protest. The donor will not care whether the schemes or projects are completed or not. Moreover, donated countries could not take care of their freedom and their rights can be violated easily.
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kindly check my paraghraph and point out the errors and mark me nos. how many i deserve with this paragraph....?
thanking in anticipation
Faiz

Fahaf Monday, March 19, 2012 12:27 AM

Certainly not!

You r right "beggers are not choosers" since they are depandent of there intrests, But in Pakistan Certainly not b'cs things are different here we have everything Alhamdulillah but still counted in the row of beggers. We are bieng violeted because of other's intrest not our own, why? aisa kiynnnnnnnnn
Bieng a part of an indepandant country, im depandant. why? only because of these landed politicians who destroyed our dream so beautifully we ll have to fight for it again.

azure Monday, March 19, 2012 01:59 AM

[QUOTE=faizkhosa;414745]Beggars are not choosers.
the maxim under reference brings home to reader a vital philosophy of life. It is the psyche of man that when he starts begging it is difficult to change his psyche. Countries, which are dependent upon donors have no choice of their own. The donors are free to do whatsoever they seem better and whenever they think their donation is not in their interest they surely will stop the donation and affected country has no right to protest. The donor will not care whether the schemes or projects are completed or not. Moreover, donated countries could not take care of their freedom and their rights can be violated easily.
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kindly check my paragraph and point out the errors and mark me nos. how many i deserve with this paragraph....?
thanking in anticipation
Faiz[/QUOTE]

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I so much wanted to go for this topic but i couldn't think of any example to apply the topic on individual level. Pakistan ki example , Muslim world ki example but on individual basis kia example doon, samajh nahe aye. And from this one paragraph it looks like you also have explained the topic only on the basis of a nation i.e when a country becomes beggar.
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Anyhow except you, i haven't come across anyone yet who opted for this topic.
I hope you score well.


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