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Having an experience of lot of different things is what make one's life interesting. everything in the world is beholding diversity, from nature to man made things. when God created the universe He was very much sure about his creation, and the nature of his man he created man with different features, abilities and nature.

man likes variety in every aspect of life like food clothes, homes and traditions, in every way he wants to be look different from others. Food without variety is not digest able that's why man denied man o salwa because there was no combo or change in it. today we see every other nation has its own immense variety of foods.

our textile and fashion industries are one of the great examples of it. this human instinct is good and healthy because it arose the sense of competition and innovation. In drinks man does not like monotonous kind of tea, now there are more then hundred type of teas along with thousand of food items when we look around we have thousands of traditions values and norms and every tradition beholds its own beauty and charm.

in short variety is a spice of life that gives all it flavors.this is fundamental truth of human nature that man can not hold on,on one single thing, his curiosity arose for an other thing after getting one. Keats very beautifully defines the nature of humankind in a poetic way "heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter"
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Having an experience of lot of different things is what make one's life interesting. everything in the world is beholding diversity, from nature to man made things. when God created the universe He was very much sure about his creation, and the nature of his man he created man with different features, abilities and nature.

man likes variety in every aspect of life like food clothes, homes and traditions, in every way he wants to be look different from others. Food without variety is not digest able that's why man denied man o salwa because there was no combo or change in it. today we see every other nation has its own immense variety of foods.

our textile and fashion industries are one of the great examples of it. this human instinct is good and healthy because it arose the sense of competition and innovation. In drinks man does not like monotonous kind of tea, now there are more then hundred type of teas along with thousand of food items when we look around we have thousands of traditions values and norms and every tradition beholds its own beauty and charm.

in short variety is a spice of life that gives all it flavors.this is fundamental truth of human nature that man can not hold on,on one single thing, his curiosity arose for an other thing after getting one. Keats very beautifully defines the nature of humankind in a poetic way "heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter"
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Still you ought to learn sentence coercion while attempting.
and bring more vocabulary for paragraph.
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Thanks for pointing out my mistakes
I will try to be more cautious next time
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madeha good effort you did very well, your ideas are enough to insist reader to read your paragraph till the end and you this is what we have to do. but as shafqat suggested you that you have to burn mid night oil. grammaticality mistake and sentence structure should be be vanished. best of luck
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I have corrected some mistakes and suggested some amendments. You have done a nice effort but you further need to work on your sentence structure. Try to make simple and short sentences. Also take care of small/capital alphabets.

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Having an experience of a lot of different things is what makes one's life interesting. Everything in the world is beholding diversity, from nature to man made things. When God created the universe, He was very much sure about His creation, and the nature of His man he created man with different features, abilities and nature.

(The bold sentence doesn't make much sense. GOD doesn't actually need surety of things because HE is all-knowing.)

Man likes variety in every aspect of life like food clothes, homes and traditions, in every way he wants to be look different from others. Food without variety is not digestible that is why man denied man-o-salwa because there was no combo or change in it. Today we see every other nation has its own immense variety of foods.

Our textile and fashion industries are one of the great examples of it. This human instinct is good and healthy because it arouses the sense of competition and innovation. In drinks, man does not like monotonous kind of tea. There are more than hundred types of tea along with thousands of food items. When we look around we have thousands of traditional values and norms and every tradition beholds its own beauty and charm.

In short, variety is a spice of life that gives all its flavors.This is a fundamental truth of human nature that man cannot hold on,on one single thing, his curiosity arouses for an other thing after getting one. Keats very beautifully defines the nature of humankind in a poetic way "heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter."
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Thanks everyone. I'll do my best in vanishing grammar mistakes in new submissions meanwhile will you please check this one. http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...alization.html

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