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Sir... The topic you have assigned me is quite analytical, im feeling trapped in the web of confusion. I have been brainstorming since last night but could not understand the main theme of proposition, should i have to interpret it in negative or positive sense........ Apart from that here, is my effort to crack this hard nut.........

Because these words are said by exclusively yanin ky me!

Dear it has both positive and negative perspectives.



Education is a lethal weapon in the nuclear age

Education is an important factor behind the progress of man has achieved in the modern world. Dear form your very first sentence, I have come to know that you have got it.. Yes, starting must be like this, just answer the question.... However, in past its pace of development was quite slow but in the modern world there has been development in all walks of life, science, technology, sociology, politics; etc. It is education that paves a way to progress and development.

Moreover, education makes a person to live a better life. In this context, Holy Prophet Hazart Mohammad (PBUH)said”an uneducated person is like a cattle”. No doubt, a human is deemed as a social animal. It is education that makes a person him a real human in the true sense. Meanwhile, education is such a vital tool that can transform a miserable life into peaceful and comfortable. [B]The point of concern is that the education is direly needed in the modern scientific era.

According to the proposition, education is a lethal weapon in the pragmatic approach. In this context, mobile and internet are the inventions of modern information communication technology that has transformed the world into a global village. Here’s education plays a vital role in advancement of technology. At the same time it has some positive and negative impacts on human life. Mobile and internet are being consistently deteriorating the youth’s education according to a recent survey in Pakistan. Youth has been wasting their precious time on mobile packages and on the internet in the name of social networking. Apart from that, nuclear technology is another outcome of modern education and science technology. No doubt, nuclear is a severe threat to humanity on one hand, while on the other hand it is being extracted to generate electricity. Ultimately, authority remains in the hands of human whether to use it in a positive or negative manner.

Consequently, education is deemed as a milestone to steer a nation toward success and progress. Likewise there is a saying that”if on wants to destroy a nation, simply snatch education from the nation.” A nation could not survive without the blessing of education. It perpetuates the wheel of progress and development of a nation.
Great dear, more or less you have understood the topic and also attempted it quite impressively. To read this expansion, I would say that now you have come to know that how to tackle an expansion and expand it . It is a creative attempt indeed.

Try this one..
Ready to kill or be in love and war (You might have read it somewhere, but these are mine words also. So, nothing to worried about and just attempt it with your flow. I want to make you a creative writer.

Dear, tomorrow I am going somewhere for some work. May be I will get back day after tomorrow. But you will have to attempt your expansions on daily basis. I will check them out inshallah...

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Default Sir Exclusively Please Evaluate my expansion too.

"The violence of war can be diluted with love"

Love is a chief band through which one can win the hearts of enemies. The power of love cannot be overlooked because it can counter the devastating effects of war. Moreover, it is a magic wand which can heal the wounds with easiness. It is used as a remedy to cure the ills of war. The aftermaths of war are usually devastating in nature. War cultivates fear and terror among people ,but this can be overcomed through the power of love.

History is full of instances which reveal that love is one of the weapons which can be used to change the world. The life of Holy Prophet PBUH is one of the greatest examples for humanity which teach us that love can change the feeling of hatred into love. The chapters of life of Holy Prophet PBuH illuminate human of all ages that love has courage to transform bitter into sweet. The hatred of woman, who used to throw garbage on Holy Prophet, was turned into love just because of the loving nature of Prophet SAW. By the same token, the conquest of Makkah is also an example which teaches one that venomous effects can be tackled nicely through love.

In Short, love can pacify the harsh feelings of enemies. It has an immense power to halt the horrible outcomes of war .Love is a panacea for the disastrous effects of war.
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your words are little complex.Be simple to some extent
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A great combination of words used by you. Sir the proposition looked like a philosophical approach... Very well said Sir...
I will attempt the next topic today.......
My well wishes are always with you, may God give you enormous happiness and success in your life............
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Bro you have advised Amannan bro to write "Love is a lethal weapon". In my opinion, this sentence is not up to the mark. How love can be deadly(lethal)? Rather we can write "Love is an effective/efficacious/efficient/potent weapon"
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"The violence of war can be diluted with love"

Love is a chief band through which one can win the hearts of enemies. The power of love cannot be overlooked because it can counter the devastating effects of war. Moreover, it is a magic wand which can heal the wounds with easiness. It is used as a remedy to cure the ills of war. The aftermaths of war are usually devastating in nature. War cultivates fear and terror among people ,but this can be overcomed through the power of love.

History is full of instances which reveal that love is one of the weapons which can be used to change the world. The life of Holy Prophet PBUH is one of the greatest examples for humanity which teach us that love can change the feeling of hatred into love. The chapters of life of Holy Prophet PBuH illuminate human of all ages that love has courage to transform bitter into sweet. The hatred of woman, who used to throw garbage on Holy Prophet, was turned into love just because of the loving nature of Prophet SAW. By the same token, the conquest of Makkah is also an example which teaches one that venomous effects can be tackled nicely through love.

In Short, love can pacify the harsh feelings of enemies. It has an immense power to halt the horrible outcomes of war .Love is a panacea for the disastrous effects of war.
Although you tried to justify the topic, I would recommend you to generalize the topic or give some examples other than Islam. Since Islam is the religion of Muslim, so majority of the candidates usually try to produce Islamic stuff. Try not to make it Islamiat paper. What if paper checker is non-Muslim; why should he believe in whatever you says. You must give those relevant example, with fact and figures, which is generally accepted all over the world. It is not always necessary you must favour the topic. But whatever your stance is you need to prove it. Besides a relevant quote or two would add to the beauty of your expansion.
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Do we live better than our forefathers?

Along with different inventions and amenities, science has created many problems and hazards in our lives. Our forefathers, without any special advancement in science, were spending a much happier and better life than us. Our forefathers' life were enriched with simplicity, purity, tranquility and true relationships. They used to spend a simple and a straight life.

In contrast to that our life is in swirls. On one hand it is tangled because of the hazards created by science and on other, purity and truthfulness is completely vanished from our society. People are spending their lives like they are in a cutthroat competition. No one cares about anyone else, everyone is leading his life like a robot does that is without any emotions. Hazards created by science like Acid rain, Erosion of Ozone layer, Contamination of Air and Water, etc. has played a devastating role in making our lives havoc.

Our forefathers were not aware of different amenities, like electricity; Televisions; Air Conditioners; Mobile phones etc, which are introduced by science. But were leading a life free of crime, terrorism and other hypocrisy. Simplicity, purity, tranquility and true relationships are the ingredients to spend a happy and peaceful life.

In a nutshell Our forefathers were really living a better life than us.
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Can i take part in this expansion writing session.
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Default Rome was not built in a day !

The Great leader and the founder of Pakistan , Quaid-e-Azam , once stated : " Pakistan was built on a day when the first Indian was converted to Islam . " It implies the meaning that the creation for a Muslim homeland had started back in antiquity . It was the courage and acumen of Sub-Continent Muslims that led them achieve their dream .Thus , like Rome , Pakistan was not built in a day .

The adage " Rome was not built in a day " elucidate the meaning that nothing on earth can be achieved in a short span of time . It requires ambition , courage and faith in success to fulfill one's desire . The gradual and constant efforts leads toward success . Furthermore , if one tries to win the world over night and he eventually succeed , that soon will rest in vain because materialistic gain is hollow and vain .

Moreover, Rome was the capital of great Roman empire . it was the pride and glory for the Romans , who had shed blood and faced severe hardship to bring it in reality . In a case of Pakistan aswell , the Muslims of sub-continent did not give up their courage at any difficult hour and remained firm under the leadership of Jinnah . And , Pakistan was the outcome of their true efforts.

In a nutshell , a great work requires a strong will and it can be accomplished only after the hard labour extending to a number of years . Thus , Rome was not built in a day .
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Default Wants are good slaves but bad master

Undoubtedly, wants are good if these are controlled but if they are unchecked they can ruin a person. Everyone have desires, wants, wishes and even try to fulfill them, nothing bad in this. But the bad thing can be if man spend his whole life in the accomplishment of a futile desire. These are the desires that lure a man to do bad and illegal things.
Allah made a man superior but he became a slave of his own desires. The one who makes the desires his masters, ruins his life with his own hands. If we see the example of our leaders, feudals and landlord they all are toys in the hand of their wants to get more and more money, power and strength.
And one who control himself, his desires can control the world. Our religion also teach us about the balance approach in every mater of life so man is successful only when his desires are slaves not the masters.

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