[QUOTE=Rimal Iman;664962]Handsome is what handsome does. The above proverb is true in its meaning that handsome is what handsome does. Quaid e Azam was a great personality for Muslims of India. He was a hero for the nation. He proved himself handsome is what handsome does. Before partition, the condition of Muslims in India was critical. Muslims were treated with strict attitude by the Hindus and the British. In this scenario, a vigilant person, came and brought a hope for the Muslims. Qaida e Azam fought with brave and courage and got a separate homeland for the Muslims. He proved himself handsome is what handsome does.



It's my first effort plz members evaluate this[/QUOTE]
[COLOR="Blue"]Good bro; i encourage your efforts. but in fact you could not get the actual idea of the proverb. This proverb is the elaboration of the idea "The things that make a man handsome in the eyes of other is his good deeds and good treatments not his attrative physiacal apparence and cloths.".
ok dear best of Luck:
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[QUOTE=Muhammad Ali Qureshi;664967][COLOR="Blue"]Good bro; i encourage your efforts. but in fact you could not get the actual idea of the proverb. This proverb is the elaboration of the idea "The things that make a man handsome in the eyes of other is his good deeds and good treatments not his attrative physiacal apparence and cloths.".
ok dear best of Luck:
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[B][SIZE="3"]A Man is an Architect Of His Own Fate[/SIZE][/B]



There is no doubt that human can make or mar his destiny. A human is an architect of his own fate. It is mention in the Holy Quran that God has created man with superior status among all creatures. Human has got the sense to discriminate bad and good. If human is trapped in severe situation, rather to blame his fate, should try to overcome the situation with the strong will.



Bill Gates the founder of Microsoft presented his idea that “if you born poor it’s not your fault but if you die poor it is your fault”. Bill could not complete his graduation. But he did never blame his fate. He architected his own fate by bringing revolution in the computer world. If he had set himself in limits, he would have never able to do that. Those are successful who do not set their limits. Steve Jobs once in his speech said that he was an unexpected baby by his parents at that time. He could not complete hi studies due to financial problems. Rather to become hopeless, he decided to change his fate. His faced arduous challenges and finally got success by launching a new technology. Today the apple company is one of the most prominent in the world.



It depends on man whether he wants to make or destroy his fate. It is mentioned in the Holy Quran that man can change his fate by offering more and more prayers. Some persons believe in stars that such stars are their fate. Their believe is like an axe to grind. Human has got strong will power and blessed with superior status. A giant metal ship is floating on the surface of water and moving forward despite of strong force of sea waves in opposite direction. Man has marked his feet on the surface of moon which was considered beyond imagination in the past. Man can do anything whatever he wants.

It seems that no one is here to assist the juniors....
Somebody on this forum told me that there are alot of angels here who steer you in the right direction. But i didnt get any response since one month.....
I have mentioned in my earlier posts that i belongs to a remote area, no access to teacher to review my written passage. I was very much sure that the senior angels of the forum would help me but now it seems that somewhere i was wrong...............

[QUOTE=Shuiab Ahmed;677498]It seems that no one is here to assist the juniors....
Somebody on this forum told me that there are alot of angels here who steer you in the right direction. But i didnt get any response since one month.....
I have mentioned in my earlier posts that i belongs to a remote area, no access to teacher to review my written passage. I was very much sure that the senior angels of the forum would help me but now it seems that somewhere i was wrong...............[/QUOTE]

Dear don't worry. I don't know about others but at least I will assist you as much as I could at my part with my little knowledge inshallah. :) You may post your expansions.

Thanks....

[QUOTE=Shuiab Ahmed;665960][B][SIZE="3"]A Man is an Architect Of His Own Fate[/SIZE][/B]



There is no doubt that human can make or mar his destiny. A human is an architect of his own fate. It is mention in the Holy Quran that God has created man with superior status among all creatures. Human has got the sense to discriminate bad and good. If human is trapped in severe situation, rather to blame his fate, should try to overcome the situation with the strong will.



Bill Gates[B],[/B] the founder of Microsoft presented his idea that “if you born poor it’s not your fault but if you die poor it is your fault”. Bill could not complete his graduation. But he did never blame his fate. He architected his own fate by bringing revolution in the computer world. If he had set himself in limits, he would have never able to do that. Those are successful who do not set their limits. Steve Jobs once in his speech said that he was an unexpected baby by his parents at that time. He could not complete hi studies due to financial problems. Rather to become hopeless, he decided to change his fate. His faced arduous challenges and finally got success by launching a new technology. Today the apple company is one of the most prominent in the world.



It depends on man whether he wants to make or destroy his fate. It is mentioned in the Holy Quran that man can change his fate by offering more and more prayers. Some persons believe in stars that such stars are their fate. Their believe is like an axe to grind. Human has got strong will power and blessed with superior status. A giant metal ship is floating on the surface of water and moving forward despite of strong force of sea waves in opposite direction. Man has marked his feet on the surface of moon which was considered beyond imagination in the past. Man can do anything whatever he wants.[/QUOTE]

Your way of expressions are quite impressive. Great work dear...Keep going on..

Rich men have no fault
 

''Those who have their home full of grains, their insanes are san'', it is well known adage.It means in our society there are two catagories of people, have and have nots.Here have means 'Rich' , and Have not means 'Poor'.Unfortunately we have developed in ourselves a native respect for rich people.Everyone likes them and they are considered VIPs everywhere.
Rich men have no faults because their richness minimizes their negative sides.It is quite authentic because in a society where rich people are symbol of glory and properity and they have sound bankground and important places in government, how anyone can point out their faults.There is no accountability for these people.
They seem like an transparent glass and without any fault and guilty but it is only a one side and other side is full of faults, but, perhaps either we really unable see to their faults or we deliberately don't want see their faults.

Well done dear ayaz..... No doubt The passage is flawless, with no grammatical errors. A simple and straight forward.
I would suggest you to expand the passage to required length by adding some examples to make it free from any ambiguity............

[B][SIZE="4"]Wants are good slaves but bad master[/SIZE][/B]

It is the reality of life that the life would become miserable if desires become master over humans. Every person has wants to fulfil. While it is a human nature that they possess perpetual desires, there is no limit of wants in human life. If one desire is completed, the other begets. There are some persons addicted of tea. A writer addicted of tea, his pen can not move until takes a sip of tea. Tea has gotten great importance in their life. Heroine addicted person feels that hi life is slipping from his hand if he does not take the doze. Addiction made him slave. The point is that one passes a miserable life when desires acts like master one’s life. One should refrain such desires which make a person slave.

Law & order situation would become worse , if one involves in illegal acts,to fulfil one’s perpetual desies. Suffcient amount of economic resources are needed to meet the desire. One involves in illegal acts and social evils like bribery, corruption to obtain one’s wants. These endless desires have the psychological effect on human mind, human would become depressed if the desire is unfulfilled. Unlimited desires make a person helpless.

It is in the Islamic teachings that one should posses limited desires which can be easily fulfilled. In the sense human would become master over desires and passes a affluent life.

Is Democracy An Ideal Form Of government
 

Democracy is by definition rule of majority, its popularly called rule of people by the people for the people. Its a form of government where supreme decisions are made by those who are elected through majority. Democracy was first adopted by western nations where struggle for human rights substituted democracy for theocracy. Freedom of expression and speech are those gifts of democracy which enfold the hushed segments of society into mainstream and promote innovation. Democracy is called an ideal form of government because of its inclusiveness and its ability to safeguard majority's interest. If implemented with its true spirit no other system can match this form of government. It prevents imposition of one man's will upon everyone and opens the door to debate. decisions which could effect the fate of whole nation are made by consensus of a common man's representative. But, sadly, in those states where prerequisites to democracy are not fulfilled it becomes a tool in hands of those in power to blackmail the poor segments of society. spiritless democracy creates hegemony of few families. It can make minorities vulnerable. But, if some states fail to create an environment suitable for democracy to grow and sustain it doesnt mean the system itself is not fruitful. Instead states like Pakistan and mideast countries should focus on their literacy rate, economic stability and judicial system so as to make things work for democracy. Where European nations are enjoying fruits of democracy countries like Pakistan Srilanka and Bangladesh should not wait for the right time to come. In the present scenario where there is no other form of government which assures supremacy of people and ensures common man's rights democracy is no doubt an ideal form of government.

[B][SIZE="4"]It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright[/SIZE][/B]
This is a symbolic proposition that unveils the anecdote of empty bag. Here’s an empty bag indicates an empty stomach .Moreover hunger is such an evil that can cajole anyone. An empty stomach person goes beyond the moral limits. The fire of hunger is direly needed to be extinguished. Hunger is caused due to paucity of resources .Mean while it has become very hard for a destitute to show a moral attitude. Less economic resources constrained the poor in the chain of helplessness. Holy prophet (PBUH) once said hunger makes an individual too helplessness to believe in god and ultimately tend to make one godlessness.
Human has divided the world into two spheres, developed and under developing by advanced technology and economic incentives. The under developing countries have suffered from scarcity of several resources that render social evils and caused anarchy in the society. Doubtless poverty is deemed as major obstacle in the way of progress. In the country like Pakistan a large part of population is under the cloud of poverty. It is seemed as an incurable disease due to lack of effective policy that can vaccinate the poverty disease. In this context major part of population falls in the darkness of poverty and helplessness, and cripples the moral structure of society.
Third world countries failed to make a flawless policy to resolve the impoverishment issue. An effective policy is dire needed to provide some relief to poorness but rather doing this the policy is made in a way that it is empowering the rich at horse’s pace, while a poor is being neglected in all walks of life. Moreover a rich is becoming richer and poor is falling in deep darkness of disgrace. Consequently such a system might render lawlessness in society. A destitute might indulge in the social evils like theft, robbery to extinguish the fire of hunger. All that means that an empty stomach is unable to show moral attitude.
Islam the religion of peace a mankind preaches and strongly emphasis the egalitarian society. Islam does not allow drawing line of discrimination on the basis of caste, creed and wealth. Moreover Islamic teaching shows a path of successful in world and hereafter .Islam introduced a system of zakat though which a helpless is benefitted with some relief. A rich person by following the teachings of Islam spends few economic resources in the name of zakat to ameliorate the misers. In this way the fire of hunger and helpless is extinguished up to some extent.
Consequently it would not be wrong to say that a helpless becomes a toy in the hand of rich who exploits the basis of right of a destitute .At the same time poor is unable to stand on his feet due to lack of resources, ultimately fall in the darkness of disgrace. In this context the dictum is beautifully and wisely quoted that an empty bag is unable to stand upright.