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Originally Posted by marvi pathan View Post
sir kindly chack my essay beggers are not choosers... i hve make it gernilized rather than specialized in any perticuler aspect...

your comments and marking shall highly be regarded....

HELPFUL GUIDE FOR WRITING


1.list various subjects that you could write about. choose one subject; then list all the ideas that suggests.
if your assignment is a definite subject , begin by listing your ideas on that subject.
2. write with a definite purpose__ to entertain, to instruct , to surprise,...
3. make a simple , easy-to-follow outline.
4. work with care on the first paragraph:
a). waste no words in unnecessary introductory remarks.
b). dont puzzle the reader. as near the beginning as possible , make clear just what you are writing about.
5. using your outline , write the composition quickly first; then go over it, revising untill you are satisfied that you have made your best effort.
a) USE VIVID WORDS AND EXPRESSIONS.
i.choose strong verbs. for example , in the sentence " he looked at me", more vivid words would be PEERED, GLARED, SQUINTED.
ii.use specific nouns , not general ones. example : hundreds of poppies(not flowers) flamed along the wall.
iii. use the words that sound like what they mean. example: zoom, crackle , bang , quack
iv.use original comparison . Example he has ears like question marks
v.use words that apppeal to five senses; that is , words that will help one to see,feel, hear , smell, or taste. whatever,it is that you are describing.
b) ELIMINATE ALL UNNECESSARY IDEAS AND WORDS.
WORDY: our dong whined in a pleading manner when i went to the door to let him into the house this morning.[21 words]
BETTER: our dog whined pleadingly when i let him in this morning [11 words]
6 select the orignal and attention-catching title. " Mr.crewcut," for example , is better title than "our neighbour"
7. proofread your paper ; that is , look for and correct any careless mistakes in capitalization, punctuation,spelling, general manuscript form.
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I highly appreciate your thoughts, they are very much the need of the time for us to get ourselves out of the whirlpool of the more complex and miserable status of being a begging state of the world,
as in urdu Iqbal says.....

Us rizq se moat achi,
jis rizq se ati ho pervaaz me kotahi...

we the youngsters need to get unite and make our sounds strong and worthful and have to show our elders the path to move on.
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