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KNOWLEDGE IS POWER :
It is wisely stated that knowledge is power. It is the knowledge which distinguishes human from the animal. By dent of knowledge man had proved to be the most powerful creature of the present world.It is ostensible that knowledge is the ultimate power but unfortunately,we have not yet been able to utilize the power of knowledge in true a manner.It is implicit that knowledge had provided us ineffable inventions that eases our lives but we must not also forget the deadliest wars.America the super power claims to be the most civilized country with the power knowledge but he had attacked Hiroshima-Nagasaki with the most destructive weapon,the atom bomb which devastated the lives of the innocents.
If we use our knowledge wisely then it will be the greatest power in a true sense.It is the knowledge which has enabled the man to step on the moon and travel the distant places with no time.The primitive knowledge has enabled to know about our ancestors and make our today’s generation better.
The last Prophet of Islam ,Muhammad(P.B.U.H) made the ignorant people to come along the true path of Islam with the power of His knowledge and made half of the world to embrace Islam.Many centuries had passed but His followers are still present,this is only because of the power of knowledge.
Death may cease the life but the everlasting knowledge remains forever by influencing the people from time to time,because knowledge is the only power that is not destructible.
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sir, your words favor the subject quotation in good manners but its size is not according to the requirements of css examiners.
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KNOWLEDGE IS POWER :
It is wisely stated that knowledge is power. It is the knowledge which distinguishes human from the animal. By dent of knowledge man had proved to be the most powerful creature of the present world.It is ostensible that knowledge is the ultimate power but unfortunately,we have not yet been able to utilize the power of knowledge in true a manner.It is implicit that knowledge had provided us ineffable inventions that eases our lives but we must not also forget the deadliest wars.America the super power claims to be the most civilized country with the power knowledge but he had attacked Hiroshima-Nagasaki with the most destructive weapon,the atom bomb which devastated the lives of the innocents.
If we use our knowledge wisely then it will be the greatest power in a true sense.It is the knowledge which has enabled the man to step on the moon and travel the distant places with no time.The primitive knowledge has enabled to know about our ancestors and make our today's generation better.
The last Prophet of Islam ,Muhammad(P.B.U.H) made the ignorant people to come along the true path of Islam with the power of His knowledge and made half of the world to embrace Islam.Many centuries had passed but His followers are still present,this is only because of the power of knowledge.
Death may cease the life but the everlasting knowledge remains forever by influencing the people from time to time,because knowledge is the only power that is not destructible.
dear, so nice Lexis is used in this proposition.... nice ideas... but what the requirement of the topic is, is not convinced.... the topic is knowledge is power ... from your short essay which idea it is convinced???? as far i grasped ,it is convincing the topic THE RIGHT USE OF KNOWLEDGE,,,,, rather KNOWLEDGE IS POWER....as you give example of American use of atom bomb it ,obviously, gives sense of USE OF KNOWLEDGE in wrong mean....
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sir, your words favor the subject quotation in good manners but its size is not according to the requirements of css examiners.
@ Aamir nazir, thanks for the appreciation ,The size according to paper is 250 to 300 words ,If I am not mistaken.The given expansion is of 240 to 260 words.
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BEGGARS ARE NOT CHOOSERS


The axiom beggars are not choosers, presents stark reality of life.
It brings to the reader that a beggar has no choice owing to his descriptive condition. He lives on the alms of others. The dole may be in the form of a coin. A beggar can not force an alms giver to pay him a dollar instead of a penny. Although a beggar is subjected to great humiliation yet, he never gives up beggary. Thus it is rightly said that beggars are not choosers.

Similarly, a beggar is devoid of self-respect. He does not have sense of self-respect. He never feels small and thus is shorn of
Self esteem. This epitomizes that money makes man’s morale to an extent.

Truly, self-reliance is a key to success. He, who depends on others, deprives from dignity. It is crystal clear that people who possess self-respect would never drag their hands to anyone.

Moreover, man wishes for the gratification of all his desires.
But simply he can not, owing to the scarcity of money resources.
In order to satiate his ballooning desires he must attain the status
Of deity . No doubt, it is essential to develop oneself financially strong enough so that wishes may be directed to realities. Otherwise, wishes without wealth welcomed by worries. In this regard someone has adroitly said,
If wants were horses, even beggars would ride on them.

It is true of modern man who wishes to possess 3Bs, namely a Buick a bungalow and a bank balance in order to have a free access to all modern convinces of life. But scarcity of resources confines him to abide by crawling desires.

Besides, the proverb beggars are not chooser demonstrates the doldrums conditions. For example a person drown in complications and conundrums tries his last ditch to dispense with somber problems. Thus, he values even worthless and trivial solutions finding himself in closed street. Hence it goes without saying that

Wants are good slaves but are bad masters


Further, the philosophy of phrase elaborates various other aspects where man is compelled and compromise on various things willy -nilly. One of them is rapid invasion of culture. Acculturation mostly in third world countries is on its full swing. The invasion of western culture has moved far ahead. We find its shadow on half of our life style. For example change in dress code, diluting parental power and strengthening children’s freedom, exorbitant use of technology and changing ideology of life all are the ingredients of western recopies’.

Moreover, it is crystal clear that developing nations follow developed one. For instance, between those two students, one who
Successfully passed exams and another trying hard to turn the corner .An aspirant one would cordially follow all those techniques which made to sparkle the stars of fortune on the former one. Likewise, poor or developing nations follow the trends and culture of developed nations. Once the trend sets up everyone starts following it and hence, it become inevitable to accept change for those who regrets alien culture. In this regard only beggars are not debarred from choice but all those people behave alike who calmly accept the stipulations of necessities.

Similarly, more often in third world countries child labour is practiced at large extent. Poor parents maimed by poverty throw their children into markets. Unaware of wan realities when a child steps ahead in outer world he never imagines that soon he would sink into the marsh of offence. Consequently another name is reckons into the massive list of crooks.
Unfortunately, Pakistan is counted among top ten child labour countries. About more than fifteen lace children are devoid of education. Poverty and haplessness confines poor parents to enjoin childlabour . Hence it goes alike that beggars are not choosers.

In addition to this illiteracy has also brought about appalling ignorance women and child abuse, drugs addiction and various other crimes are the outcome of illiteracy at certain extent. Thus society is constraint to bear the burnt of above crimes as beggar bears disgust and taunts.

A part from it, the saying suits the political conditions of those nations who seek foreign aid. Unfortunately our beloved country Pakistan is one of them. Most prominent aid donor country to Pakistan is America. U.S has made our political leadership to dictate foreign commands. Besides, we live like strangers in our own country. Where a foreigner may have access to justice but our ordinary man is far behind from the path of justice. Take the example of Ryman Deves CIA’s secret agent who gun downed
Three Pakistani in lahor yet he was vindicated through political hatch.

Another incident which annihilated not only the rules of international law but also violated the sovereignty of Pakistan.
It was U.S unilateral action in the form of mission germino
In which notorious terrorist usma bin ladin was encountered in Abotabad. According to reliable media;

U.S coups entered Pakistan without the permission of higher authorities.

Besides, attacks on salala check post and drones are some more episodes of same drama. Thus, Pakistan in that case replaces the position of beggar who can not choose between alms and dignity.
Amarica as donor country exploits the sovereignty as much as it can and Pakistani politicians shamelessly can not defy the wishes of their foreign lords. Therefore, it is obligatory for Pakistan to break the begging bowl and make its slogan;
Trade not aid!
Since it has proven the dependence detracts dignity. One who lives of the behalf of others like beggars, certainly he is exploited and embarrassed. In this refrence it is well said in urdu….

Chirdyon ki terha dany pay girta hy kyon,
Perwaz rakh buland k banjae tou uqab.


Above of all self respect and self reliance are key to success. Otherwise it would not be wrong to say;
Bggers are not choosers.
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sir kindly chack my essay beggers are not choosers... i hve make it gernilized rather than specialized in any perticuler aspect...

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@ marvi pathan
so nice work. it is really appreciable writing. Relevant and exact verbs and nouns are used. specially as you have defined the topic BEGGARS ARE NOT CHOOSER is very eloquent and clear.
sub quotations are relevant to the topic quotation.
conclusion is convincing.
the paragraph of CHILD LABOUR, it should be skipped as far i think, because it not relevant to the theme... HOW this paragraph is relevant to the theme?
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sir kindly chack my essay beggers are not choosers... i hve make it gernilized rather than specialized in any perticuler aspect...

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@ Marvi , You have written well,I suggest you to post your expansions in the thread made by Zuhaib Ahmed "Everyone Please take part in expansion".It will be more helpful ,your writting will be checked on daily bases by seniors and CSP's.

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sir RIAZ SOLANGI thank you for your lucrative and comprehensive comments...
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i mentioned the child labor in the topic as i believe that it is practiced on the account of certain compulsions where people find themselves between devil and deep blue see....

Mr braveHeart i realy dun knw how to post on that perticuler thread as i hve recently join css forum... kindly send me the process so that i may do very job..

thank you for your reply sir....
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Mr braveHeart i realy dun knw how to post on that perticuler thread as i hve recently join css forum... kindly send me the process so that i may do very job..

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