Respected Seniors please check my expansion and evaluate it critically
 

Future can never be predicted with perfect accuracy but it can be gauged by considering certain parameters. The similar reality is substantiated by the adage which implies that the personality of an individual can be envisaged by a cursory glance over his childhood. The personality of an adult is simply a product of traits and characteristics he exhibits in his younger age. The attributes of a man are often the developments of the features he had when he was a child. As Milton has aptly pronounced, “The child shows the man, As morning shows the day”. Most of the qualities be it physical, mental and social will ripe with the passage of time and will be manifested in mature form in adulthood. It seems true that a child with positive traits and habits will emerge as a constructive member of the society while a child with negative predispositions will prove a curse in social terms. So, the childhood preferences and inclinations determine the man of future.
The history bear witness to the fact by having many such personalities in its annals. Hazrat Muhammad (P. B. U. H), a great reformer, who changed the map of the world with his revolutionary thoughts, was equally a man of generosity and high acumen in his childhood. Similarly, Adolf Hitler harbored a stubborn child himself and he emerged as the most cruel man in the cosmos. Titian, an eminent Turkish artist, is an epitome of it. But the maxim cannot always be true and the existence of exception can never be denied.
In a nutshell, the childhood is a crucial phase of life and it must be dealt carefully on the part of the parents as it paves the way for future personality. The parents must pay heed to the temporal and moral training of the child to make him a productive organ of the society.

your expansion is without subject, it could not be evaluated properly.

read it ive done some changes in some structures
 

The future can never be predicted with perfect accuracy but it can be gauged by considering certain parameters. The similar reality is substantiated by the adage which implies that the personality of an individual can be envisaged by a cursory glance over his childhood. The personality of an adult is simply a product of the traits and characteristics he exhibits in his younger age. The attributes of a man are often the developments of the features he had when he was a child. As Milton aptly pronounced, “The child shows the man, as morning shows the day”. Most of the qualities be it physical, mental and social will reap with the passage of time and will be manifested in mature form in adulthood (most of the qualities either physical mental or social ripe with the passage of time and manifests in mature form in adulthood). It seems true that a child with positive traits and habits will emerge as a constructive member of the society while a child with negative predispositions will prove a curse in social terms(will prove to be a curse In social terms). So, the childhood preferences and inclinations determine the man of future.
The history bear witness to the fact by having many such personalities in its annals. Hazrat Muhammad (P. B. U. H), a great reformer, who changed the map of the world with his revolutionary thoughts, was equally a man of generosity and high acumen in his childhood. Similarly, Adolph Hitler harbored a stubborn child himself and he emerged as the most cruel man in the cosmos. Titian, an eminent Turkish artist, is an epitome of it. But the maxim cannot always be true and the existence of exception can never be denied.
In a nutshell, the childhood is a crucial phase of life and it must be dealt carefully on the part of the parents as it paves the way for future personality. The parents must pay heed to the temporal and moral training of the child to make him a productive organ of the society.

the future.....the traits....milton has aptly pronounce .........reap with the time.....history bears...an exception......