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seniors please check my expansion
a man is known by compnay he keeps
This Proverb clearly depicts the societal impacts on human life.Everrything around man has impacts of different genre as when you enter in garden which is full of blossoming flower then you feel happiness in your innerself.Likewise effects of circle of man can not be denied.As Vietnamese Saying beautifully describes it "Close to ink,you will be blackened,near the lamp you will be lit-up" Thousands Years ago ,Aristotle termed "man is social animal,so when a man join willy-nilly nature men or good natured ones then his character and intellacts clearly expound it that what influence he is getting from his circle. Prophet PBHU was greatest man in human history,as his companion were illeterate and vrutal warrior ,but when they joined Prophet PBUH,They refurbish their characters and named in history as stars of sky. It does not matter where a man is,he attracts another akin to nature of himself as "birds of feather flock together." |
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Reply to niazikhan2
1. There are some grammatical mistakes, try to over-come them by practicing more and more.
2. In the very beginning of the paragraph define the meaning of the chosen topic in clear but to the point wording. 3. Try to explain the topic by giving an example from daily life and do not rely only on quotations and proverbs. 4. Define the topic according to your own mental approach rather writing traditional sentences, other-wise the examiner will not reward you good marks 5. Your effort is appreciable however do more practice to have some sufficient grip. Hope you will take it seriously and positively. Best of luck!
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