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[B][U][CENTER]Brevity is the soul of the wit[/CENTER][/U][/B]
Brevity is defined as the concise expression of a point in least possible words. Humans have been gifted with the most elaborate and eloquent speaking mechanism which they love to use. But too many words seek the charm out of any concept-They destroy the essence of any idea. Just like too many cooks spoil the broth, too many words distract both the speaker and the listener. Not only does the listener lose interest in a long speech but the speaker also loses track of the gist he intended to deliver in the first place. Appropriately worded brief statements have a more powerful impact then lengthy sentences. In order to maintain the sanity of any conversation the speakers are advised to keep their sentences short and to the point.

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Very good effort. Why don't you try writing a long essay having proper outline? Because, then it will be more convenient for others to evaluate your writing skills. Hope you are good in other subjects as well. I am saying this because many aspirants make this deadly mistake of focussing on their favourite subjects while ignoring other subjects. If you have similar grip over other subject as well, then you have my words that you will pass css :)

@Sarrial Banda:Thank you so much for your encouraging replies. Actually I am really scared of Essay Myself and facing a hard time collecting and organizing my thoughts.
As for other subjects,I can only pray that everything turns out well!

My pleasure but let me assure you that only prayers can't make your dreams come true. And yes, clarity, organization & presentation of thoughts is very important for not only essay paper but in fact for all the subjects.

P.S: Hope you won't mind my bitter words as my name justifies my comments (kidding).

a good effort ayman. Dont waste anymore time in expansion. I think its done.