the fact that not ignorance but ignorance of ignorance is true ignorance encompass the justification of existence of behavior which are antagonistic to all fact of society and state . true ignorance prevails when intellectual social and moral maturities cease to exit in society . not condemning the despicable behavior which come in sphere of ignorance cause state to lag behind other state. it effect people not only individual level but on national level as well. countries with such frame work base on true ignorance attract anti-state factor to come into play leading to collapse whole system . thus adoption of appropriate measures to overcome appalling outcome of true ignorance is need of hour

Your thoughts are indeed impeccable. However, there are 2 or 3 grammatical mistakes in your expansion. In the third line ( Affects not effect), and ( encompasses nor encompass)

Rightly expressed few grammatical mistakes like 'to collapse whole system' 'behind other state' instead of 'states' and ,base, instead of "based" other thing is that instead of individual level it would be better to write individually. And is not it unsuitable "state lags behind other states". 2nd, as you mentioned "countries with such framework based on true ignorance" are not these two phrases with same meaning. By the way expansion was difficult your writing is admirable.

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civil society should endeavour to cultivate the sense of maturity among all segment of society . media should present strategies to equip the society with moral ,ethical and intellectual maturity to counter the effect of true ignorance . being ignorant from true ignorance is reason why societies , dreamed to be called civilized one remain unfulfilled. ineptness to differentiate behavior that are against societal norms doesn,t exhibit a lack of education rather it manifest that society is devoid of social and moral consciousness . unintentional acknowledgment behavior laid to foundation of true ignorance >...

Some grammatical mistakes, corrections are; all segment instead of all segments, 'acknowledgement behaviour ( noun twice ), manifest instead of 'manifests' etc...
Go through Wren & Martin, a good book regarding grammar. And Some other points i noted,
1. "Media should present...." It would be better to write "media should be used to present....."
2. "being ignorant from true ignorance is reason why societies, dreamed to be called civilised one remain unfulfilled" idea is suitable but you must present it in its clear form. If i write it "being ignorant from true ignorance was one of those reasons that weakened/paralysed many civilizations that had been expected to flourish" or "ignorance of true ignorance caused many civilisations to lag behind the most other civilisations".
3.try to write 'social' instead of 'societal'
4.sentence from "ineptness' to 'consciousness" makes very confused & comparative sense.
5. Last sentence got me to read it thrice even though i couldn't get it explicitly.
Your ideas are critical, i am also new in writing so i have another expansion topic, what if we write it ? Topic is "Every dark cloud has a silver lining".


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thank you so much for correction. some mistakes are due to typing but really some mistakes are exist in sentence i try to improve them INSHALLAH . yes why not i will try to write on this topic and express your views on this topic too

This is my paragraph it's my first expansion therefore sometimes i am wandering from the point.


Every dark cloud has a silver lining.

In this proverb lies a great and optimistic aspect of life, reflecting the essence of life. Every dark cloud has a silver lining, means difficulties although big or vexed in our life, have always a joyous end. This end is what brings along hope and happiness that in our life nothing unpleasant remains more. This end has been the end of sufferings we were reeling. How difficult is the situation at the moment, next is a joyous dawn.
How can one achieve the joy of quenching, without being thirsty. So the difficulties are the ones that contain the key of happiness and delight. In this quotation contains a lesson that your each moment of bad time is a test of your faith that how can you endure your sorrows, if you have belief on the dawn coming next, you will live the each moment in peace and patience. How dark the clouds are, these must have to pass letting the sky clear. So the extent of happiness and goodness lies in one's extent of bearing the sufferings of life. The more we are patient when facing the problems the more we achieve the joy of our existence.
As success has not been mere outcome of our single effort but it has been the verdict of those failures we undergo, it has been the outcome of those tiresome moments we face. So all good is what coming through the way of difficulties. Thus bad time in life is actually interim and this darkness has also a silver lining.
As every dusk has not been end but a foreshadow of dawn. But there remains no delight of the dawn for the ones who lose their consciousness in the fear of dusk.
How deep the sea is, it always ends to beautiful islands. And we had never seen the beauty of islands, if we would have feared from the depth of the sea.
Every day we see the same sun but it looks different after when disappears the dark clouds. Thus happy moments are the same moments we experience always but that is the potent by one endure the difficulties, that makes them different. Thus this quotation lies the transparency to a big reality of life that never lose your hope because Every dark cloud has always a silver lining.

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now you read my ideas and compare with your,s EVERY DARK CLOUD HAVE SILVER LINING a great prover with deep meaning. this proverb show that life is not bed of roses it create hurdle to check your abilities and capacities. here clouds show or reflect the problems, hardship and disguise in one life and silver lining reflect the hope. gold become expensive after passing through the fire in the same way struggles and hardship are sign of future better time . life is full of challenges longer we live more we face the events . life is full of dark cloud looming on our hearts but remember every thing is not bad as it seem . HOPE IS FAITH HOLDING OUT ITS HAND IN DARK BY UTTERED GEORGE . the example of having a baby is a very good example. For the mother, 9 months carrying a human being in their stomach is too much of a responsibility. The mothers will have pain and would have to eat as twice because she must feed herself and the baby. She would have to give up stuff like sports or walking a lot or just hanging around with her friends. She must be at home resting and doing very small things. Those 9 months for her pregnancy might be frustrating but when the day comes for the baby to come out, the mother will feel happy and satisfied. as same this is faith or silver lining or hope of future which compels the mother to bear all this The sweet star of faith is already rising over thy grief; the clouds, all bright and shining with hues caught from heavenly skies, are no longer dark and ray-less; if our sky are without cloud and our all happy and joyous have disappeared but still one faith remain which is praise to ALLAH who loved us and hath given us victory

Your paragraph is good and a good expansion must contain the appropriate examples that you have given. Next time I will also try to define the expansion in examples and one one best things you wrote is that quote "Hope is faith holding out its hand in dark' i appreciate. And sometimes you also have wandered from the subject but overall good paragraph. And how is my paragraph you did not comment ?

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Yes, one thing is that in conclusion you must quote the subject as i worded the topic in my last line. Because it creates impression on the reader. And another thing is that don't involve religious sense in such topics because it narrows the sense.

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