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I eat Indian food for lunch yesterday.

I will borrow you Ł100.

He's hobbies are listening to music and collecting stamps.

Two of her daughter are students.

She don't like taking a trip with her family.

My father name is David Haines.

Please borrow me your car.


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Correct the Mistake
One word is wrong in each sentence. Find this word, and correct them.

I eat Indian food for lunch yesterday.

I will borrow you Ł100.

He's hobbies are listening to music and collecting stamps.

Two of her daughter are students.

She don't like taking a trip with her family.

My father name is David Haines.

Please borrow me your car.


At the second floor of my house is my bedroom.


I ate/had Indian food for lunch yesterday.

I will lend you $100.

His hobbies are listening to music and collecting stamps.

Two of her daughters are students.

She doesn’t like taking a trip with her family.

My father’s name is David Haines.

Please lend me your car.

On the second floor of my house, is my bedroom.


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My brother, your name is so difficult to be judged.
By the way you have made all of the sentences correct.
Thanks alot for your reply.
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1. I eat Indian food for lunch yesterday

When you are talking about past, your verb must refer to past. It must be ate rather than eat.

2. He's hobbies are listening to music and collecting stamps.

He`s implies he is or he has. It should be his instead of he`s.

3. I will borrow you Ł100.

It’s an equivocal sentence which fails to refer the actual subject. The definition of ‘Borrow’ is to take or obtain with a promise to return the same. Where as “Lend” mean to give on condition.

I will lend you Ł100.


4. She don't like taking a trip with her family.

She doesn`t like because she is a singular second-person subject.

5. Please borrow me your car.

Similarly, a verb borrow is faulty in clause. It should be either to give or to lend.

6. Two of her daughters are student.

When first noun is plural second noun must be plural.

7. At the second floor of my house is my bedroom.

Above statement is ambigious. It must be separated through a comma. In other case, A verb may be appended to correct it.

My bedroom is situated on the second floor of my house.






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Asslamualaikum,

Let's have some correct and incorrect sentences and try to correct them by the knowledge that we have regarding English Grammar.

My brother, Mr.Tauqeer kurd requested about the correction of sentences, so brother here they are. But reasons must be pasted. Judge whether these sentences are correct or incorrect?

Phrasal Verbs Quiz.
1 Why do we always talk the weather about?

2 My mother switched the radio off this morning.

3 I will look your letter forward to.

4 He was nice, but we turned down him.

5 I believe in ghosts, don't you?

6 We will have to wait the bus for at the corner.

7 Melissa is going to look after the children.

8 I have to put the baby down while I sweep the floor.

9 Why don't you switch the music over while you wait?

10 Can you go to the store before we run milk out of.

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Asslamualaikum,

I must make it clear that all of these sentences are incorrect so try to make them correct.
  1. In this summer, I went to Finland with my friend.
  2. We study hard in high school in order to entrance a good university.
  3. I think Latvian students should think over the risk their taking.
  4. The Europeans and Asians are completely different each other.
  5. I have a problem to memorizing names of people.
  6. I spent most of my time in the train with reading my favourite magazine.
  7. I think I am really lucky that I could met you.
  8. Almost all students in the college do not seem to study hard.
  9. I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students have been increasing.
  10. She is a too clever woman to stay in a so boring job.
  11. In last years the Finnish economy has improved markedly.
  12. Never I have seen such an excited film.
  13. We arrived to Gdansk for two hours ago.
  14. The news are in the television soon.
  15. I will another cup of coffee, please.
  16. What means gibberish please?
  17. In spite of he was tired,his wife made him to wash-up dishes.
  18. He is living by his uncle on the country.
  19. I was given lots of advices about buying new furnitures.
  20. I could not be without laughing when he explained it me.
  21. He got married with a Polish in last year.
  22. She is waiting now her third child.
  23. They have spared carefully their money.
  24. Magda is living there during six months.
  25. Are you still interesting to do a trip to the Tatra Mountains.
  26. The city of Gorzów is full of factories, though it is surrounded by some lovely nature.
  27. The company was grounded in 1999.
  28. There are many cheap things at the realisations in the warehouses behind the corner.
  29. In near future I shall be going to abroad in every case.
  30. In Poland we are used to live in a cold climate.
  31. We shall not go unless we shall be asked.
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In this summer, I went to Finland with my friend.
Last summer, I went to Finland with my friend.


Quote:
[*]We study hard in high school in order to entrance a good university.
We study hard in high school(s) in order to get admission in a good university.

[*]
Quote:
I think Latvian students should think over the risk their taking.
I think, Latvian students should think about the risk they are taking.

[*]
Quote:
The Europeans and Asians are completely different each other.
The Europeans and Asians are completely different from each other.
[*]
Quote:
I have a problem to memorizing names of people.
I have a problem in memorizing names of people.
[*]
Quote:
I spent most of my time in the train with reading my favourite magazine.
I spent most of my time in the train by reading my favourite magazine.
[*]
Quote:
I think I am really lucky that I could met you.
I think I am really lucky that I could meat you.
[*]
Quote:
Almost all students in the college do not seem to study hard.
Almost all of the students in the college, do not seem to study hard.

[*]
Quote:
I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students have been increasing.
I have found that the number of universities which are accepting foreign students, have been increasing.

[*]
Quote:
She is a too clever woman to stay in a so boring job.
She is too clever woman to stay in a boring job.
[*]
Quote:
In last years the Finnish economy has improved markedly.
In last (few)years, the Finnish economy has been improved remarkably.

[*]
Quote:
Never I have seen such an excited film.
I have never seen such an excited film.
[*]
Quote:
We arrived to Gdansk for two hours ago.
We arrived at Gdansk (be)fore two hours ago.
[*]
Quote:
The news are in the television soon.
The news would be in the television soon.

[*]
Quote:
I will another cup of coffee, please.
I need one more cup of coffee, please./Can I have one more cup of coffee, please?
[*]
Quote:
What means gibberish please?
What does gibberish mean, please?
[*]
Quote:
In spite of he was tired,his wife made him to wash-up dishes.
he was tired in spite of his wife. She made him to wash-up dishes.
Quote:
[*]He is living by his uncle on the country.
He is living with his uncle in/by the country(side).

Quote:
[*]I was given lots of advices about buying new furnitures.
I was given lot of advices about buying new furnitures.
[*]
Quote:
I could not be without laughing when he explained it me.
I could not be without laughing when he explained it to me.
[*]
Quote:
He got married with a Polish in last year.
He got married with a Polish last year.
[*]
Quote:
She is waiting now her third child.
She is expecting now her third child.
[*]
Quote:
They have spared carefully their money.
They have used their money carefully.
(sparing(Aayashii:PP) cant be done carefully )

[*]
Quote:
Magda is living there during six months.
Magda is living there from six months.
[*]
Quote:
Are you still interesting to do a trip to the Tatra Mountains.
Are you still interested to do a trip to the Tatra Mountains?
[*]
Quote:
The city of Gorzów is full of factories, though it is surrounded by some lovely nature.
Although The city of Gorzów is full of factories, but it is surrounded by lovely nature(as well).
[*]
Quote:
The company was grounded in 1999.
The company was over to ground in the year 1999.
[*]
Quote:
There are many cheap things at the realisations in the warehouses behind the corner.
There are many cheap things in the realisations of the warehouses behind the corner.
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In near future I shall be going to abroad in every case.
In near future, I shall must(will) be going to abroad. (every case can be used in URDU, HER HALL MEIN :PP)
[*]
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In Poland we are used to live in a cold climate.
In Poland we are used to live in a cold weather.
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Quote:
We shall not go unless we shall be asked.
We shall/should not go unless we are asked.



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Asslamualaikum,

Let's have some correct and incorrect sentences and try to correct them by the knowledge that we have regarding English Grammar.

My brother, Mr.Tauqeer kurd requested about the correction of sentences, so brother here they are. But reasons must be pasted. Judge whether these sentences are correct or incorrect?

Phrasal Verbs Quiz.
1 Why do we always talk the weather about?

2 My mother switched the radio off this morning.

3 I will look your letter forward to.

4 He was nice, but we turned down him.

5 I believe in ghosts, don't you?

6 We will have to wait the bus for at the corner.

7 Melissa is going to look after the children.

8 I have to put the baby down while I sweep the floor.

9 Why don't you switch the music over while you wait?

10 Can you go to the store before we run milk out of.

Regards..
1.Why do we always talk about the weather ?

2.My mother switched off the radio this morning.

3.I will look forward to your letter.

4.He was nice but we turned him down

5.I believe in ghosts.Do you ?

6.We will have to wait for the bus at the corner.

7.Correct i think

8.This is also correct

9.Why don't you switch the music on while/untill you are waiting.

10.Can/Will you go to the store before we are run out of milk ?
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[*] In this summer, I went to Finland with my friend.


1.Last summer I went to Finland with my friend.

[*]We study hard in high school in order to entrance a good university.

2.We study hard in high schools in order to get admission in a good university.
[*]I think Latvian students should think over the risk their taking.

3.I think Latvian students should think over the risk they are taking.
[*]The Europeans and Asians are completely different each other.

4.The Europeans and Asians are completely different from each others.
[*]I have a problem to memorizing names of people.

5.I have a problem in momorising the names of people.
[*]I spent most of my time in the train with reading my favourite magazine.

6.I spent most of my time in/by reading my favourite magazine in the train.[*]I think I am really lucky that I could met you.

7.I think I am really lucky that I could meet you.
[*]Almost all students in the college do not seem to study hard.

8.Almost all of the students in the college don't seem to study hard.
[*]I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students have been increasing.

9.I have found that the number of universities that accept foreign students are increasing.
[*]She is a too clever woman to stay in a so boring job.

10.She is too clever to stay in such a boring job.
[*]In last years the Finnish economy has improved markedly.

11.For the last few years the Finnish economy has been improving markedly.
[*]Never I have seen such an excited film.

12.I have never seen such an excited film.
[*]We arrived to Gdansk for two hours ago.

13.We arrived at Gdansk two hours ago.
[*]The news are in the television soon.

14.The news will/would be in the television soon.
[*]I will another cup of coffee, please.

15.I would like to have another cup of coffee please.
[*]What means gibberish please?

16.What does gibberish mean ,please ?
[*]In spite of he was tired,his wife made him to wash-up dishes.

17.In spite of this that he was tired ,his wife made him to wash up the dishes.
[*]He is living by his uncle on the country.

18.He is living with his uncle in the country.
[*]I was given lots of advices about buying new furnitures.

19.I was given lot of advice about buying new furniture.
[*]I could not be without laughing when he explained it me.

20.I could not helped laughing when he explained it to me.
[*]He got married with a Polish in last year.

21.He married a Polish last year.
[*]She is waiting now her third child.

22.She is now expecting her third child
[*]They have spared carefully their money.

23.They have spared/spent their money carefully.
[*]Magda is living there during six months.

24.Magda has been living there for six months.
[*]Are you still interesting to do a trip to the Tatra Mountains.

25.Are you still interested in a trip to the Tatra mountains.
[*]The city of Gorzów is full of factories, though it is surrounded by some lovely nature.

26.Though the city of Gorzow is full of factories yet it is surrounded by some lovely nature.

[*]The company was grounded in 1999.

27.The company was dissolved/liquidated in 1999.

[*]There are many cheap things at the realisations in the warehouses behind the corner.

28.There are many cheap things in the realisations of the warehouses behind the corner.
[*]In near future I shall be going to abroad in every case.

29.I shall be going abroad in the near future at every cost.
[*]In Poland we are used to live in a cold climate.

30.We are used to live in a cold weather in Poland.
[*]We shall not go unless we shall be asked.

31.We shall not go unless we are asked to.
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Asslamualaikum,

Let's have some correct and incorrect sentences and try to correct them by the knowledge that we have regarding English Grammar.


8 I have to put the baby down while I sweep the floor.

10 Can you go to the store before we run milk out of.

Regards..
(with due respect.. may i try to correct the above two sentences...)

i think the above sentences should sound like these:

8 I have to put down down the baby while i SWEPT the floor.

10 Can you go to the store before we run out of milk?
( i think there is no need of "are" in the above sentence..)

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