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Raz Friday, March 13, 2009 12:22 AM

@Lord AvaLon

Please answer my question which I have raised twice in my previous posts.

Lord AvaLon Friday, March 13, 2009 12:28 AM

e) He told Aslam to get his coat.

If you are talking about this one so I still have ambiguity.
Either “You” or “My” should be used as both of them seem to fit.

Raz Friday, March 13, 2009 12:45 AM

[QUOTE=Lord AvaLon]e) He told Aslam to get his coat.

If you are talking about this one so I still have ambiguity.
Either “Your” or “My” should be used as both of them seem to fit.[/QUOTE]

Exactly, I was talking about this one.
Direct:He said, "Get your coat, Aslam."
Indirect: He told Aslam to get his coat.
Direct: He said, "Get my coat, Aslam."
Indirect: He told Aslam to get his coat.


In both the cases of "your" or "my", Indirect form seems same.
This is what I was trying to explain.

Now if we are asked to change the narration of following sentence:
He told Aslam to get his coat. (Indirect)
To be prudent we can assume that he is asking Aslam to get Aslam's own coat. Becuase here we use our common sense i.e. coat blongs to Aslam.

Keeping in view the above logic I prefer "Your"
He said, "Get your coat, Aslam." (Direct)


Your solution ( He said, "Get my coat, Aslam.") do seem correct but one thing which makes it odd i.e. why he is giving his own coat to Aslam.
Most probably that coat belongs to Aslam that is why Aslam is asked to get his coat.

dr.atifrana Friday, March 13, 2009 07:34 AM

[FONT="Arial Black"][COLOR="Magenta"]This Question remains unsolved, where r you guys [/COLOR][/FONT]:blink:

d) Art lies in concealing art.

[B][U]EXAMINATION 1987
ENGLISH (Précis & Composition)[/U]

5. Complete any five of the following sentences supplying the missing word or phrase in
each: 10[/B]

a) He wondered _________ he had lost his money.
b) Her father knew that she ____________________________________ disobey him.
c) When Ahmed saw me coming he
d) Don’t imagine you can get away
e) He puts up almost anything.
f) 1 have applied ______ a new job.
g) Her parents strongly object ________ her travelling alone.
h) As soon as the plane had refuelled ______
i) __________ you take this medicine, you will feel better.
j) A car with a good engine can go

Kamran Friday, March 13, 2009 08:44 AM

[B]@ Raz[/B]

[quote]What if we write like: "that of Mushataq" instead of Mushtaq's and "these" instead of "them"


What if we write:

There was a very different atmosphere in the town this morning than that of yesterday's.

OR

Atmosphere was very different this morning than that of yesterday's.


These are not corrections. Please opine one these examples.[/quote]

Brother,we need not to Re-produce/Re-organise the Sentnces...just mark the error and make it correct...
I am not saying that yr sentences are wrong...but its my opinion...Anyone may differ with me.

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[quote]he wondered _________ he had lost his money.[/quote]

he wondered that he had lost his money.

[quote]Her father knew that she ____________________________________ disobey him.[/quote]

Her Father knew that she had disobeyed him.

[quote]1 have applied ______ a new job[/quote]

I have applied for a new job.

[quote]Her parents strongly object ________ her travelling alone.[/quote]

Her parents strongly object with her travelling alone.


[quote]__________ you take this medicine, you will feel better.[/quote]

If you take this medicine,you will feel better.

dr.atifrana Friday, March 13, 2009 10:06 AM

I think

he wondered _________ he had lost his money.

he wondered [I][B]how[/B][/I] he had lost his money.

Her parents strongly object ________ her travelling alone

Her parents strongly object [I][B]to[/B][/I] her travelling alone.


This remains unsolved.

d) Art lies in concealing art.

Lord AvaLon Friday, March 13, 2009 10:31 AM

[QUOTE=dr.atifrana]
he wondered [I][B]how[/B][/I] he had lost his money.
[/QUOTE]

Can't we say

He wondered [I]whether[/I] he had lost his money.

The person is not yet sure of it as he is wondering.

dr.atifrana Friday, March 13, 2009 10:44 AM

I think

c) When Ahmed saw me coming he
c) When Ahmed saw me coming he hid behind the wall.

d) Don’t imagine you can get away
d) Don’t imagine you can get away from prison.

e) He puts up almost anything
e) He puts up almost anything in getting this painting

h) As soon as the plane had refuelled ______
h) As soon as the plane had refuelled the passengers fastend their safety belts.

j) A car with a good engine can go
j) A car with a good engine can go 300 hundred miles unstoppably without heating up its engine.

[COLOR=deepskyblue][U][B][I]I feel glad if you participate in these exercises wholeheartedly.[/I][/B][/U][/COLOR]

[B][U]EXAMINATION 1972[/U][/B]
[B][U]ENGLISH (Précis & Composition)[/U][/B]

[B]3. a) Use the following words in at least two senses, either as a verb or as a noun or as an adjective or as both:[/B]

Clear, Face, Energy, Value, Build.

[B]b) Use the following idiomatic expressions in illustrative sentences:[/B]

Carry out, Taken over, Bring about, Beat out, Bear with.

Raz Friday, March 13, 2009 12:36 PM

[quote=dr.atifrana]Guys this remains unsolved.

d) Art lies in concealing art.[/quote]

I think these words indicate the impressive touch which is given to art related outputs. By concealing art we mean putting such meaningful and thought provoking features in product that need some concentration to grasp its hidden meanings which are really vast but not so easy to understand. This happens in practical life any art-related product either painting or monument etc. which is normally beyond the understanding of layman and is piece of deep message for the intellectuals / familiar persons gets more publicity and is awarded with great honor.
Incorporating simple messages and easy to understand with minimum hidden message and intrinsic value require little effort to comprehend the message but that product gets lesser publicity as compared to that of philosophical and hidden message conveying product.

[B]The more the common and open product the lesser will be worth.[/B]
[B]The more the unique and complex product the higher will be the worth.[/B]

This explanation is based on my personal observation which I have observed in practical life. There is no reference to quote for the meaning of above words. Actual meaning may differ with this explanation.

[quote=Kamran5011]he wondered that he had lost his money.


Her Father knew that she had disobeyed him.


Her parents strongly object with her travelling alone.

[/quote]

Her father knew that she will not disobey him. ([B]had[/B] is not correct as the sentence contains 1st form of the verb i.e. [B]obey[/B])
or
Her father knew that she did not disobey him.

Her parents strongly object [B]on [/B]her travelling alone. ([B]with[/B] doesn't fit here, [B]to[/B] is better than [B]with[/B] but[B] on[/B] is even better than [B]to)[/B]

Mostly, verb [B]object[/B] demands following prepositions: to, on, over
whereas [B]object with [/B]looks somewhat odd.

dr.atifrana Friday, March 13, 2009 01:24 PM

I think

Her Father knew that she never disobeyed him.


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