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Bad breath is one of the many common problems faced by many people almost all around the world. However, it does not remain a common one when you yourself suffer from it. There are no. of factors that contribute to addition of bad smell to your breath. Poor dental hygiene is one of the most obvious reasons of bad breath in many people.


Poor dental hygiene means that your teeth and oral cavity are not cleaned properly, so bacteria begin to settle and breed in your oral cavity. This uncalled for breeding of bacteria in your mouth results in the production of plaque. This plaque not only makes your breath stinking but also speed up your teeth decay. And only brushing tooth is not proper dental hygiene. You have to clean your whole oral cavity including gums, tongue and cheeks. The process of dental hygiene must start with flossing, as it loosens the food particles present along with your teeth, the next step is brushing out the food particles and in the end use a good mouthwash.

Dental hygiene is not the sole cause of smelling breath, there are many others, bad sinuses is one of them. Bad sinuses means the continuous dripping of protein rich material, that includes dead sinuses cells, blood cells, pus cells and many other cells produced by the body, into the throat and posterior part of the tongue. This protein rich material proves to be a ‘feast’ for the bacteria present in the oral cavity. Now with a continuous food supply the bacteria continue to multiply and hence adding more plaque and making the breath more stinking. Whatever may be the reason of bad breath, the curing manner is not different. The important thing is to get rid of bacteria present in your mouth. Along with usual cleaning, the use of tongue scrapers may prove very helpful in curing bad breath due to bad sinus. These tongue scrapers are not hard to find at any pharmacy. To use a tongue scraper for the first time may be a little difficult because you may feel like gagging or even vomit while using it. You have to scrub your tongue till the posterior part of it with the scraper. Besides cleaning your tongue you must go to some good doctor to cure your sinus problem, because it can be cured very easily with the help of simple medication and nasal sprays. In this way you can make your life healthier.


It is easy and simple to cure bad breath in yourself, but quite tough to cure if some one from your family, friends or clients is suffering from it, and is ignorant of the fact. So first of all that person will have to realize about it, before he can go for redemption from it. If you are frank enough to talk about it with that person, you must. But what to do when one of your clients is having bad breath and you have to talk to him for hours? Hint at the issue in a very friendly manner, like just by offering mints or chewing gums. It is far better to make some one realize of the fact then gossiping about it. Bad or smelling breath is actually a vast subject to ponder over it., it can be hoped that this article has urged you to make your life and your surroundings free of bad breath.
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aoa all
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Bad breath is one of the many common problems faced by many people almost all around the world. However, it does not remain a common one when you yourself suffer from it. There are no. of factors that contribute to addition of bad smell to your breath. Poor dental hygiene is one of the most obvious reasons of bad breath in many people.


Poor dental hygiene means that your teeth and oral cavity are not cleaned properly, so bacteria begin to settle and breed in your oral cavity. This uncalled for breeding of bacteria in your mouth results in the production of plaque(s). This plaque not only makes your breath stinking but also speed up your teeth decay. And only brushing tooth is not proper dental hygiene (Brushing teeth is not the only dental hygiene). You have to clean your (replace oral with "the") whole oral cavity including gums, tongue and cheeks. The process of dental hygiene must start with flossing, as it loosens the food particles present along with your teeth, (finish this sentence here, so use full stop) the next step is brushing out the (may be "the" should not be used here) food particles and in the end use a good mouthwash.

Dental hygiene is not the sole cause of smelling breath (either use "breath smelling" or smelling of breath"), there are many others,(finish your sentence here) bad sinuses is one of them. Bad sinuses(use pronoun like "it" "this") means the ("the" is not needed) continuous dripping of protein rich material, that (either use "which" to connect 2 parts of sentence with out using comma, and if you use "that" make a new sentence) includes dead sinuses cells, blood cells, pus cells and many other cells produced by the body ("cell" is repeated too much), into the throat and posterior part of the tongue. This protein rich material proves to be a ‘feast’ for the bacteria present in the ("the" is not needed)oral cavity. Now with a continuous food supply the ("the" is not needed) bacteria continue to multiply and hence adding more plaque and making the breath more stinking. Whatever may ("may" is not needed) be the reason of bad breath, the curing manner is not different. The important thing is to get rid of bacteria present in your mouth. Along with usual cleaning, the use of tongue scrapers may prove very helpful in curing bad breath due to bad sinus (do check for use of sinus as singular or plural in both place, use same either plural or singular, or if there's strong reason in your mind to use plural earlier and singular here, then its okay). These tongue scrapers are not hard to find at any pharmacy. To use a tongue scraper (use pronoun) for the first time may be a little difficult because you may feel like gagging or even vomit(ting) while using it. You have to scrub your tongue till (I guess you should use "up to" instead of "till") the posterior part of it with the scraper. Besides cleaning your tongue you must go to some good doctor (doctor or dentist ????) to cure your sinus problem, because (omit "because" and use new sentence) it can be cured very easily with the help of simple medication and nasal sprays. In this way you can make your life healthier (I guess you should say "make your breath smell free or smell good" because the specific aim of the article is to remove smell from breath and not making life healthy).


It is easy and simple to cure bad breath in yourself (should have been like this "you can also cure bad breath yourself, but it's quite tough is....), but quite tough to cure if some one from your family, friends or clients is suffering from it, and is ignorant of the (this) fact. So first of all that person will have (has to realize) to realize about it ( realize this, not about this, "this"), before he can go for redemption from it. If you are frank enough to talk about it with that person, you must. But what to do when one of your clients is having bad breath and you have to talk to him for hours? Hint at the issue (give him hint about this) in a very friendly manner, like just by offering mints or chewing gums. It is far better to make some one realize of ("of" is not needed) the fact then gossiping about it. Bad or smelling breath is actually a vast subject to ponder over it., it can be hoped that this article has urged you to make your life and your surroundings free of bad breath.

I tried to improve it according to my own knowledge, There may be still some mistakes and in some places may be I am wrong too. There have been repetitions of words as well at some places.
And yeah never use any word which is not needed to be used.

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Bad breath is one of the many common problems faced by many people almost all around the world. However, it does not remain a common one when you yourself suffer from it. There are no. of factors that contribute to addition of bad smell to your breath. Poor dental hygiene is one of the most obvious reasons of bad breath in many people.
Halitosis is one of the many common problems faced by people around the world. However, it does not remain common when you find yourself suffering from it. There are number of factors that cause bad smell to your breath. Poor dental hygiene is one of the most obvious reasons of bad breath in many people.

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Poor dental hygiene means that your teeth and oral cavity are not cleaned properly, so bacteria begin to settle and breed in your oral cavity. This uncalled for breeding of bacteria in your mouth results in the production of plaque. This plaque not only makes your breath stinking but also speed up your teeth decay. And only brushing tooth is not proper dental hygiene. You have to clean your whole oral cavity including gums, tongue and cheeks. The process of dental hygiene must start with flossing, as it loosens the food particles present along with your teeth, the next step is brushing out the food particles and in the end use a good mouthwash.
Poor dental hygiene means that your teeth and oral cavity are not properly cleaned, so bacteria reside and breed in your oral cavity. Thus result in the production of plaque. The plaque not only makes your breath stinking but also speeds up the teeth decay. And brushing the tooth is not a proper dental hygiene.
You have to clean your whole oral cavity including gums and tongue. The process of dental hygiene must start with flossing, as it cleans/removes the food particles present between teeth gaps, the next step is to brush out the food particles and in the end use a good mouthwash.


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Dental hygiene is not the sole cause of smelling breath, there are many others, bad sinuses is one of them. Bad sinuses means the continuous dripping of protein rich material, that includes dead sinuses cells, blood cells, pus cells and many other cells produced by the body, into the throat and posterior part of the tongue. This protein rich material proves to be a ‘feast’ for the bacteria present in the oral cavity. Now with a continuous food supply the bacteria continue to multiply and hence adding more plaque and making the breath more stinking. Whatever may be the reason of bad breath, the curing manner is not different. The important thing is to get rid of bacteria present in your mouth. Along with usual cleaning, the use of tongue scrapers may prove very helpful in curing bad breath due to bad sinus. These tongue scrapers are not hard to find at any pharmacy. To use a tongue scraper for the first time may be a little difficult because you may feel like gagging or even vomit while using it. You have to scrub your tongue till the posterior part of it with the scraper. Besides cleaning your tongue you must go to some good doctor to cure your sinus problem, because it can be cured very easily with the help of simple medication and nasal sprays. In this way you can make your life healthier.
The other factor involved in halitosis is bad sinuses, bad sinuses means the continuous dripping of protein rich material, that includes dead sinuses cells, blood cells, pus cells and other cells produced by the body into the throat and posterior part of the tongue. These protein rich materials prove to be a ‘feast’ for the bacteria present in the oral cavity. With this continuous food supply the bacteria continue to multiply and hence adding more plaque and making the breath more stinking. Whatever may be the reason of bad breath, the curing manner is not different. The important thing is to get rid of bacteria present in your mouth. Along with usual cleaning, the use of tongue scrapers may prove very helpful in curing bad breath due to bad sinus. These tongue scrapers are easily available at pharmacy. Tongue scraper may be a little difficult to use for the first time because you may feel gagging or even vomit while using it. You have to scrub your tongue to the posterior part. Besides cleaning your tongue you must visit a good doctor to cure your sinus problem, because it can be cured easily with the help of simple medication and nasal sprays. In this way you can make your life healthier.



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It is easy and simple to cure bad breath in yourself, but quite tough to cure if some one from your family, friends or clients is suffering from it, and is ignorant of the fact. So first of all that person will have to realize about it, before he can go for redemption from it. If you are frank enough to talk about it with that person, you must. But what to do when one of your clients is having bad breath and you have to talk to him for hours? Hint at the issue in a very friendly manner, like just by offering mints or chewing gums. It is far better to make some one realize of the fact then gossiping about it. Bad or smelling breath is actually a vast subject to ponder over it., it can be hoped that this article has urged you to make your life and your surroundings free of bad breath.
It is easy and simple to cure yourself from bad breath, but quite tough to cure if some one from your family, friends or clients is suffering from it, and is ignorant of the fact. So first of all that person will have to realize it before going for redemption. If you are frank enough to talk about it with that person, you must go for it. But what to do when one of your clients is having bad breath and you have to talk to him for hours? Hint at the issue in a very friendly manner, like offering him mints or chewing gums. It is far better to make some one realize of the fact then gossiping about it. Bad breath is actually a vast subject to ponder over it., it can be hoped that this article has urged you to make your life and your surroundings free of bad breath.
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