Plz Help correct these sentences.
 

5 (B) Make corrections in any
five of the following where
necessary ? 1). What does a patient tell a
doctor it is confidential ?
2). It is a fact that I almost
drowned makes me very
careful about water safety
whenever I go swimming 3). Did they not consider this as
quiet convincing
4). St Peter’s at Rome is the
largest of all other churches
5). The amount they receive in
wages is greater than twenty years ago
6). They succeeded with hardly
making any effort
7). Whatever have you done !
8). The officers were given
places according to their respective ranks.

[QUOTE=koozagar;462485]5 (B) Make corrections in any
five of the following where
necessary ?

1). What does a patient tell a doctor it is confidential ?
[/QUOTE]

What a patient tells a doctor is confidential.

[QUOTE]2). It is a fact that I almost drowned makes me very careful about water safety whenever I go swimming
[/QUOTE]

It is a fact that I [B]have[/B] almost drowned makes me very careful about water safety whenever I go swimming.

[QUOTE]3). Did they not consider this as quiet convincing[/QUOTE]

Did they not consider this as [B]quite[/B] convincing?

[QUOTE]4). St Peter’s at Rome is the largest of all other churches[/QUOTE]

St Peter’s [B]of [/B]Rome is the largest of all other churches.

[QUOTE]5). The amount they receive in wages is greater than twenty years ago[/QUOTE]

The amount they receive in wages is greater than [B]that of[/B] twenty years ago.

[QUOTE]6). They succeeded with hardly making any effort.
[/QUOTE]

They succeeded hardly making any effort.

[QUOTE]7). Whatever have you done ![/QUOTE]

[B]What [/B]have you done !

[QUOTE]8). The officers were given places according to their respective ranks.[/QUOTE]

The officers were given places according to their ranks.

Thanks Sis For Help.
 

Dear Sister I've no idea how to spot the errors in these kind of sentences. Either an expert or an astute reader can point the errors out of otherwise semingly correct sentences.I'd realy appreciate if you could solve this question, simaltaneously correcting and evaluating it.Thanks alot for time that you have given to this post and I hope that you will continue helping the beginners like I'm.
CSS 2006.
Correct the following sentences.
(1) Playing a game regularly is
better than to read books
always.
(2) A good reader must be
hardworking and possess intelligence.
(3) I noticed Akbar was
carrying a bag in his hand.
(4) Having entered his house,
the door was shut at one.
(5) He thinks that his writing is better than his friend.
(6) He is such a man who is
liked by everyone.
(7) I sent a verbal message to
my friend.
(8) He has visited as many historical places as one has or
can visit.

You may see this thread.Here past papers are solved,

[url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compulsory-subjects/english-precis-composition/grammar-section/22288-sentence-correction-past-papers.html[/url]

If still you want my help then do let me know.

All the best !

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;462551]What a patient tells a doctor is confidential.



It is a fact that I [B]have[/B] almost drowned makes me very careful about water safety whenever I go swimming.



Did they not consider this as [B]quite[/B] convincing?



St Peter’s [B]of [/B]Rome is the largest of all other churches.



The amount they receive in wages is greater than [B]that of[/B] twenty years ago.



They succeeded hardly making any effort.



[B]What [/B]have you done !



The officers were given places according to their ranks.[/QUOTE]
@Farrah
2. The fact that I had drowned makes me very careful about water safety whenever I go swimming.
3. Didn't they consider it as quite convincing.
4. St Peter's in/of Rome is the largest church/ of all churches. (it's superlative not comparative)
6. They succeeded making hardly any effort. (hardly is adverb of manner, it follows the verb) e.g "he wrote the letter carefully" and not "he carefully wrote the letter"

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;462551]What a patient tells a doctor is confidential.



It is a fact that I [B]have[/B] almost drowned makes me very careful about water safety whenever I go swimming.



Did they not consider this as [B]quite[/B] convincing?



St Peter’s [B]of [/B]Rome is the largest of all other churches.



The amount they receive in wages is greater than [B]that of[/B] twenty years ago.



They succeeded hardly making any effort.



[B]What [/B]have you done !



The officers were given places according to their ranks.[/QUOTE]
Sir please explain the structure of this sentence
1. What does a patient tell a doctor it is confidential?
what a patient tells a doctor is confidential. (how was it solved) please explain

1. What does a patient tell a doctor [B]if[/B] it is confidential? (Not sure)

2. [B]The fact[/B] that I almost drowned makes me very careful about water safety.

3. Did they not consider this as [B]quite[/B] convincing.

4. St.Peter's in Rome is the largest [B]of all[/B] churches.

5. The amount they [B]received[/B] in wages is greater than twenty years ago.

6. They succeded [B]while[/B] hardly making any effort.

7. [B]What[/B] have you done?

8. [B]The officers[/B] were given places according to their ranks.

Other than #1, they were all quite easy.

1)What a patient tell a doctor is confidential.
What a patient tell a doctor=noun clause

2)It is a fact that I almost drowned and it made me very careful about water safety whenever I go swimming.

3)Did they not consider this (to be) quite convincing?
Negative question.

4)St Peter in Rome is the largest of all the churches.

5)Th amount that they receive in wages is greater than what it was twenty years ago.

6)They succeeded without hardly Making any effort.(not sure)

7)Whatever you do!
Idiom

8)The officers were given
places according to their ranks.

St. Peter's Church=correct

Correction
 

1). What does a patient tell a
doctor it is confidential ?

What I think:
Correct: What does a patient tell to doctor it is confidential.