kindly correct the given sentence
 

When public transport is
better developed these will
no longer be so many
cars driving people to
work.

[QUOTE=Mushgaan ahmed;509180]When public transport is
better developed these will
no longer be so many
cars driving people to
work.[/QUOTE]


When public transport would more be developed, it might be no longer that so many people drives car to work.

When public transport is
better developed these will
no longer be so many
[B]people driving cars [/B]to
work.