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saima saim Saturday, November 17, 2012 07:03 PM

Prepare Direct Indirect for CE 2013
 
Dear All Please check the following Direct Indirect of paper 2010 and please correct them if they are wrong. :sad:

He Said "May I open the window? It's rather hot in here.
Ans : He asked might he open the window that's rather hot in there.

He asked me if he should leave it in the car
Ans: He Said to me "Shall I leave it in the car.

The Teacher said "You must not forget what I told you last lesson. I shall expect You to be also to repeat it next lesson by heart.
Ans: The Teacher said that I must not forget what she/he had told me last lesson she would expect me to be also to repeat it next lesson by heart.

I told her to stop making a fuss about nothing and said that she was lucky to have a seat at all
Ans: I said to her " Stop making a fuss about nothing" and told her " she is lucky to get a seat at all"

Dialogue Form
She asked if he'd like to go to the concert and I said I was sure he would .
Ans: She: "Would He like to go to concert"
Me : " I am sure he will"

"Please send whatever you can spare. All contributions will be acknowledge immediately" said the secretary of the disastrous fund.
Ans: Sectary of the the disastrous fund requested to sent whatever we could spare. All contributions would be acknowledged immediately.

"Would you like to see over the house or are you more interested in the garden?" she asked me.
Ans: She Inquired me If I would like to see over the house or was I more interested in the garden.

"I could not get into the house because I had lost my key, so I had to break a window" he said
He said that he could not get in to the house he had lost his keys, thus he had to break a window.

Ghost Rider Saturday, November 17, 2012 09:23 PM

[QUOTE=saima saim;513031]Dear All Please check the following Direct Indirect of paper 2010 and please correct them if they are wrong. :sad:

He Said "May I open the window? It's rather hot in here.
Ans : He asked if he might open the window as it was rather hot in there.

He asked me if he should leave it in the car
Ans: He Said to me "Shall I leave it in the car.
He said to me" Shall i leave it in the car?"

The Teacher said "You must not forget what I told you last lesson. I shall expect You to be also to repeat it next lesson by heart.

Ans: The Teacher said that I must not forget what she/he had told me last lesson and further said she would expect me to be also to repeat it next lesson by heart.

I told her to stop making a fuss about nothing and said that she was lucky to have a seat at all

Ans: I said to her " Stop making a fuss about nothing" and told her " she is lucky to get a seat at all"

Dialogue Form
She asked if he'd like to go to the concert and I said I was sure he would .
Ans: She: "Would He like to go to concert"
Me : " I am sure he will"

"Please send whatever you can spare. All contributions will be acknowledge immediately" said the secretary of the disastrous fund.
Ans: Sectary of the the disastrous fund requested to sent whatever we could spare. All contributions would be acknowledged immediately.

"Would you like to see over the house or are you more interested in the garden?" she asked me.
Ans: She Inquired me If I would like to see over the house or was I more interested in the garden.

"I could not get into the house because I had lost my key, so I had to break a window" he said
He said that he could not get in to the house he had lost his keys, thus he had to break a window.[/QUOTE]

He asked if he might open the window as it was rather hot in there.

He said to me" Shall i leave it in the car?"

The Teacher said that I must not forget what she/he had told me last lesson and further said she would expect me to be also to repeat it next lesson by heart.

saima saim Saturday, November 17, 2012 09:31 PM

[QUOTE=Ghost Rider;513121]He asked if he might open the window as it was rather hot in there.

He said to me" Shall i leave it in the car?"

The Teacher said that I must not forget what she/he had told me last lesson and further said she would expect me to be also to repeat it next lesson by heart.[/QUOTE]

they are wrong or write?

Ghost Rider Saturday, November 17, 2012 09:40 PM

[QUOTE=saima saim;513125]they are wrong or write?[/QUOTE]

Check your first post.

You did not give question mark in the asked narration.

saima saim Saturday, November 17, 2012 09:46 PM

Thanks Dear will post more tommorow un ko b check karna ap Thanks again

Malicious Sunday, November 18, 2012 09:06 AM

[QUOTE=saima saim;513031]Dear All Please check the following Direct Indirect of paper 2010 and please correct them if they are wrong. :sad:



I told her to stop making a fuss about nothing and said that she was lucky to have a seat at all
Ans: I said to her " Stop making a fuss about nothing" and told her " [B][U]she is[/U][/B] lucky to get a seat at all"

"Please send whatever you can spare. All contributions will be acknowledge immediately" said the secretary of the disastrous fund.
Ans: Sectary of the the disastrous fund requested to [B][U]sent[/U][/B] whatever we could spare. All contributions would be acknowledged immediately.

[/QUOTE]
I said to her, "Stop making a fuss about nothing" and told her "[B]You are[/B] lucky to get a seat at all."

The Secretory of the disaster fund requested to [B]send[/B] whatever we could spare.

seher bano Sunday, November 18, 2012 05:36 PM

Direct Indirect(2012) please check are they OK....?
(b) Change the narration from direct to indirect or indirect to direct speech (DO ONLY FIVE). Extra attempt shall not be considered.
1. He said to us, "You cannot do this problem alone".
2. The beggar asked the rich lady if she could not pity the sufferings of an old and miserable man and help him with a rupee or two.
3. The Commander said to the soldiers, "March on".
4. He entreated his master respectfully to pardon him as it was his first fault.
5. "Do you really come from America? How do you feel in Pakistan?" Said I the stranger.
6. The officer threatened the peon to come in time otherwise he would be turned out.
7. People wished that the Quaid e Azam had been alive those days to their fate.
8. They said, "Brave! Imran, what a shot".
Answers:
1. He told us that we could not do that problem alone.
2. The beggar said to the lady, “Will you not pity the sufferings of an old and miserable man and help me with a rupee or two?”
3. The commander ordered the soldiers to march on.
4. He begged his master respectfully, “Please, pardon me as it is my first fault.”
5. I asked the stranger whether he really came from America and how he felt in Pakistan.
6. The officer warned the peon, “Come in time otherwise you will be turned out.”
7. People desired, “Quaid-i-Azam has been alive these days to see our fate.”( not confirmed)
8. They admired Imran that what a shot it was.

Da Skeptic Monday, November 19, 2012 06:43 PM

[QUOTE=seher bano;513455]Direct Indirect(2012) please check are they OK....?
Answers:

4. He [U][B]begged[/B][/U] his master respectfully, “Please, pardon me as it is my first fault.”[/QUOTE]
He said to his master........
[QUOTE=seher bano;513455]
6. The officer [B][U]warned[/U][/B] the peon, “Come in time otherwise you will be turned out.”[/QUOTE]
The officer said to the peon..........
[QUOTE=seher bano;513455]
7. People [B][U]desired[/U][/B], “Quaid-i-Azam has been alive these days to see our fate.”( not confirmed)[/QUOTE]
Peopl said, "Would that Quaid-e-Azam were alive these days to see our fate."
[QUOTE=seher bano;513455]
8. They admired Imran that [B][U]what a shot it was[/U][/B].[/QUOTE]
The admired/applauded Imran that it was a good/great/splendid shot.

[B]Note: The corrections may not be perfect and above board, but these are to the best of my knowledge of English Grammar.[/B] :)

Ahmed Faisal Monday, November 19, 2012 10:18 PM

[QUOTE=seher bano;513455]Direct Indirect(2012) please check are they OK....?
(b) Change the narration from direct to indirect or indirect to direct speech (DO ONLY FIVE). Extra attempt shall not be considered.
1. He said to us, "You cannot do this problem alone".
2. The beggar asked the rich lady if she could not pity the sufferings of an old and miserable man and help him with a rupee or two.
3. The Commander said to the soldiers, "March on".
4. He entreated his master respectfully to pardon him as it was his first fault.
5. "Do you really come from America? How do you feel in Pakistan?" Said I the stranger.
6. The officer threatened the peon to come in time otherwise he would be turned out.
7. People wished that the Quaid e Azam had been alive those days to their fate.
8. They said, "Brave! Imran, what a shot".
Answers:
1. He told us that we could not do that problem alone.
2. The beggar said to the lady, “Will you not pity the sufferings of an old and miserable man and help me with a rupee or two?”
3. The commander ordered the soldiers to march on.
4. He begged his master respectfully, “Please, pardon me as it is my first fault.”
[B]There is nothing bad in using Begged...( You Can)[/B]
5. I asked the stranger whether he really came from America and how he felt in Pakistan.
6. The officer warned the peon, “Come in time otherwise you will be turned out.”
[B]Warned should be use as the officer is warning the peon and not saying ordinarily..[/B]
7. People desired, “Quaid-i-Azam has been alive these days to see [B]our [/B]fate.”( not confirmed)
[B]People said/Wished/desired, " The Quaid-i-azam was alive these days to see their fate."[/B]
8. They admired Imran that what a shot it was.
[B]This is ok. you can also use .....imran that it was a good shot...( Both are correct)[/B][/QUOTE]

It is really a good attempt..

Ahmed Faisal Monday, November 19, 2012 10:36 PM

7. People desired, “Quaid-i-Azam [B]has been[/B] alive these days to see [B]our [/B]fate.”

People said/Wished/desired, " The Quaid-i-azam [B]was[/B] alive these days to see [B]our [/B]fate."

Both are ok Now..


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