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Iqra Qambrani Friday, May 03, 2013 12:06 AM

chek my sentences
 
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abdicate: I was abdicated all my responsbilty becuase MR X satnd opposite to me.
He will abdicate their authorities in the favor of new mananger.
our last parnicipal abdicated because of low sallary.
you should have to abdicate.
Abeyance:the flights was abeyance till the pleasent weather
All meetings were abeyance before the election.
Exame are abeyance till the constraction of school.
I have to abeyance my all work till iwil come back to pakistan.
Abhor:He abhorred all sins which were done by him.
You should have to abhor sin not siner.
X abhorred all bad habits of Y so Y detest X.
Abjure:Student abjured theirt misatkes to the teacher.
we have to abjure our all sin infront of Almighty ALLAH.
It is good abjured sin for the next time.

Durrani Abid Friday, May 03, 2013 12:17 AM

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abdicate: I was abdicated all my responsbilty becuase MR X satnd opposite to me.
He will abdicate their authorities in the favor of new mananger.
our last parnicipal abdicated because of low sallary.
you should have to abdicate.
Abeyance:the flights was abeyance till the pleasent weather
All meetings were abeyance before the election.
Exame are abeyance till the constraction of school.
I have to abeyance my all work till iwil come back to pakistan.
Abhor:He abhorred all sins which were done by him.
You should have to abhor sin not siner.
X abhorred all bad habits of Y so Y detest X.
Abjure:Student abjured theirt misatkes to the teacher.
we have to abjure our all sin infront of Almighty ALLAH.
It is good abjured sin for the next time.[/QUOTE]

Almost none of your sentence is grammatical.
Please revisit them.

khAdijAA Friday, May 03, 2013 12:43 AM

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abdicate: I was abdicated all my responsbilty becuase MR X satnd opposite to me.
He will abdicate their authorities in the favor of new mananger.
our last parnicipal abdicated because of low sallary.
you should have to abdicate.
Abeyance:the flights was abeyance till the pleasent weather
All meetings were abeyance before the election.
Exame are abeyance till the constraction of school.
I have to abeyance my all work till iwil come back to pakistan.
Abhor:He abhorred all sins which were done by him.
You should have to abhor sin not siner.
X abhorred all bad habits of Y so Y detest X.
Abjure:Student abjured theirt misatkes to the teacher.
we have to abjure our all sin infront of Almighty ALLAH.
It is good abjured sin for the next time.[/QUOTE]
there are a lot of mistakes in almost all sentences.

Gotam Friday, May 03, 2013 01:10 AM

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abdicate: I was abdicated all my responsbilty becuase MR X satnd opposite to me.
He will abdicate their authorities in the favor of new mananger.
our last parnicipal abdicated because of low sallary.
you should have to abdicate.
Abeyance:the flights was abeyance till the pleasent weather
All meetings were abeyance before the election.
Exame are abeyance till the constraction of school.
I have to abeyance my all work till iwil come back to pakistan.
Abhor:He abhorred all sins which were done by him.
You should have to abhor sin not siner.
X abhorred all bad habits of Y so Y detest X.
Abjure:Student abjured theirt misatkes to the teacher.
we have to abjure our all sin infront of Almighty ALLAH.
It is good abjured sin for the next time.[/QUOTE]



Consult a dictionary first for the meaning of a word, understand it by all means. That means covering its meaning, part of speech and usage etc. Then attempt to make the use of it in a sentence. Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary would be of great help in this regard. Do this and then post the sentences again here.

afzaliffi Friday, May 03, 2013 10:42 AM

commenting is easier than correction. no one has corrected the mistakes. strange.

Gotam Friday, May 03, 2013 12:56 PM

[QUOTE=afzaliffi;594032]commenting is easier than correction. no one has corrected the mistakes. strange.[/QUOTE]

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A Chinese proverb goes like this "Give a man a fish and you feed him for a day. Teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime."

See if we give her everything at this very initial stage then she will never learn to apply her skills, will never be able to capitalize on her beginning. So I thought to help her atleast try rather than piling up a stack of corrected sentences that she will, for sure, forget. I guided her to follow the procedure to let her solve herself so that she should learn for lifetime.


Regards,

Durrani Abid Friday, May 03, 2013 01:42 PM

[QUOTE=Gotam;593962]Consult a dictionary first for the meaning of a word, understand it by all means. That means covering its meaning, part of speech and usage etc. Then attempt to make the use of it in a sentence. Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary would be of great help in this regard. Do this and then post the sentences again here.[/QUOTE]

Dear
We could correct all her sentences,but we have not and left her to correct her sentences herself with intention to make her read and learn grammar rules.
Our correction would have been of lesser importance, since she appears to be unaware of the fundamentals of grammar ets.

Simply our intention is to make her learn and now it is left to you to decide that which is of more impotance, our correction or her learning!

Hope it's no more strange to you.

Stay blessed

khAdijAA Friday, May 03, 2013 03:49 PM

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abdicate: I was abdicated all my responsbilty becuase MR X satnd opposite to me.
He will abdicate their authorities in the favor of new mananger.
our last parnicipal abdicated because of low sallary.
you should have to abdicate.
Abeyance:the flights was abeyance till the pleasent weather
All meetings were abeyance before the election.
Exame are abeyance till the constraction of school.
I have to abeyance my all work till iwil come back to pakistan.
Abhor:He abhorred all sins which were done by him.
You should have to abhor sin not siner.
X abhorred all bad habits of Y so Y detest X.
Abjure:Student abjured theirt misatkes to the teacher.
we have to abjure our all sin infront of Almighty ALLAH.
It is good abjured sin for the next time.[/QUOTE]
abdicate:I abdicated all my responsibility because Mr.X stood(was standing)opposite to me
He will abdicate his authorities in the favor of new manager.
Our last principal abdicated his post because of low salary.
You should abdicate.(should have to,would have to,could have to are used in conditional sentences not in independent sentences).
Abeyance:The flight was abeyance till the weather became pleasant.
All meetings were abeyance before the holding of elections.
Exams are abeyance till the construction of school.
I have to abeyance my all work till i will come back to Pakistan.
Abhor:he abhorred all sins which were committed by him.
You should abhor sin not sinner.
X abhorred all bad habits of Y so Y detested X.

khAdijAA Friday, May 03, 2013 04:03 PM

[QUOTE=Iqra Qambrani;593947].
Abjure:Student abjured theirt misatkes to the teacher.
we have to abjure our all sin infront of Almighty ALLAH.
It is good abjured sin for the next time.[/QUOTE]

abjure means to renounce,recant,to abstain from
the first two sentences are not making any sense.
it is good to abjure sin for the next time.

aafia Friday, May 03, 2013 04:23 PM

Khadija pointed out all grammatical mistakes nicely. Dear, no one wants to discourage you, the best thing is that you tried. Have a look on grammar and vocabulary and keep trying.


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