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Syria, a Battle Ground

Have you ever noticed that Muslim Ummah all around the world have been facing a tough time for many years. The situation of Iraq, Iran, Pakistan, Syria, and Egypt etc is a case in point. Let us talk about Syria. Recently, a Jihadist militia, belongs to Islamic state of Iraq, killed a commander named “Kamal Hamami” who belonged to Free Syrian Army. The Jihadist group also threatened that they would also kill top brass of FSA. Furthermore, it is said that the assassinated commander was trying to talk with rivals so that they could jointly initiate military operation in Syria. This all mess has further aggravated the already troublesome situation. Categorically, this assassination may turn the state of affairs into anarchy and sectarian violence.

Sadly, Saudi Arab and Qatar, even when 2/3 of Syrians are already against the president Bashar al Asad, are the major financial and military supporters of extremists in Syrian.

In addition, it would be pertinent to note that Al-Qaeda and even Pakistani Taliban are making inroads in Syria so that the current scenario could be turned into anarchy and chaos. These banned outfits are also trying to work in tandem with those who have greater Islamic agenda, and this move has a potential to fully destabilize Middle East.

Moreover, there is an obvious difference among the governments in the western world on the operation on Syrian soil. Whatever the matter is western society, OIC and other peace making organization should endeavor to make Geneva peace making conference successful.

It would be ridiculous to think that this problem is the problem of Syrian people. If we do not interfere to clean up the mess, the fire of anarchy, chaos, and sectarianism would in all likelihood engulf us as well. Time to think!
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Have you ever noticed that Muslim Ummah all around the world have been facing a tough time for many years?The situation of Iraq, Iran, Pakistan, Syria, and Egypt etc is a case in point. Let us talk about Syria. Recently, a Jihadist militia, belongs to[replace belongs to with belonging to] Islamic state of Iraq, killed a commander named “Kamal Hamami” who belonged to [replace belonged to with was from]Free Syrian Army[FSA]. The Jihadist group also threatened that they would also [ replace underlined with to] kill top brass of FSA. Furthermore, it is said that the assassinated commander was trying to talk with rivals so that they could jointly initiate military operation in Syria. This all mess has further aggravated the already troublesome situation. Categorically, this assassination may turn the state of affairs into anarchy and sectarian violence.

Sadly, Saudi Arab and Qatar, even when 2/3 of Syrians are already against the president Bashar al Asad, are the major financial and military supporters of extremists in Syrian.

In addition, it would be pertinent to note that Al-Qaeda and even Pakistani Taliban are making inroads in Syria so that the current scenario could be turned into anarchy and chaos. These banned outfits are also trying to work in tandem with those who have greater Islamic agenda, and this move has a potential to fully destabilize Middle East. [there is no need to write this para separately, omit in addition and combine the para with its preceeding para]

Moreover, there is an obvious difference among the governments in the western world on the operation on Syrian soil. Whatever the matter is western society, OIC and other peace making organization should endeavor[endeavour because endeavor has completely different meaning]to make Geneva peace making conference successful.

It would be ridiculous[replace ridiculous with unwise] to think that this problem is the problem of Syrian people. If we do not interfere[write act instead of interfer] to clean up the mess, the fire of anarchy, chaos, and sectarianism would in all likelihood engulf us as well. Time to think!

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