Sentences Correction from Precis & Compostion paper 2014
 

[SIZE="5"][B]Please post the corrections of the followings:[/B][/SIZE]

[COLOR="Green"][B][SIZE="4"]1. Each furniture in this display is on sale for half price.
2. He is abusing the money of his father.
3. The duties of the new secretary are to answer telephone, to type letters and
bookkeeping.
4.The new models are not only less expensive but more efficient also.
5. He complied with the requirement that all graduate students in education
should write a thesis.
6. No sooner we left the shop it began to rain.
7. The population of Karachi is greater than any other city in Pakistan. [/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]

1. Each furniture in this display is [B]for[/B] sale [B]on[/B] half price.
2. He is [B]misusing/ wasting[/B] the money of his father.
3. The duties of the new secretary are to answer telephone, to type letters and
bookkeeping.
4.The new models are not only less expensive but [B]also[/B] more efficient.
5. He complied with the requirement that all graduate students in education
should write a thesis.
6. No sooner[B] did [/B]we left the shop [B]when[/B] it began to rain.
7. The population of Karachi is greater than any other city [B]of [/B]Pakistan.

each article of furniture
the population of karachi is greatest
more is not used with efficient

1. [B]Each article of furniture[/B] in this display is sale on half price.
2. He is [B]wasting[/B] the money of his father .
3.the duties of the new secretary [B]is [/B]to answer telephone,to type letters and book keeping .
4.the new models are not only less expensive[B] but also[/B] more efficient .
5.?
6.[B] No sooner did we leave the shop than it began to rain .
[/B]7.The population of Karachi is [B]greatest [/B]than any other city in Pakistan
.
[B]Correct me please[/B]

no sooner did we leave the shop then it began to rain
the duties of the new secretary are to answer telephone, to type letter and bookkeeping

all the furniture displayed here is for sale on half price
no sooner had we left the shop than it began to rain
he is misusing the wealth of his father.
the pouplation of karachi is more than that of any other city in pakistan

each piece of furniture in this display is on sale for half price
he is abusing the money of his father
no sooner had we left the shop than it began to rain

he is abusing powr of his father
no sooner we left than it began to rain

Comprehension paper
 

The population of Karachi is greater than that of any other city in Pakistan.

The new models are not only less expensive but are also more efficient
or
The new models are not only less expensive but more efficient too.

No sooner did we leave the shop then it began to rain
or
as soon as we left the shop,it began to rain.

Population of Karachi is larger than any other city in Pakistan.

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