@ easha

Your precis - writing is good but try to exploit concrete views. Your precis is lacking creativity. Furthermore, U have not paid heed on punctuation.

However , It is marvelous for your first attempt......... keep it up !!!

Chao,

@ Hayat and S khan

You`re always welcome !!!

Take care,

thanx. but i m poor in grammar can u plz correct my mistakes.secondly i cant understand what u mean by creativity .do u mean its not a copact whole?plz guide.

aslam o alikum
when the next precis will come?i m waiting eagerly.
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@ easha

I wasn`t able to update precis - writing because paucity of time but i ll throw next precis passage within two days. Till then explore following links :

Grammar : http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...xpression.html

Creativity : http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...structure.html

These links will definately solve out your all queries and you`ll know , what i meant.

Take care,

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Write a Précis of the following passage in about 100 words and suggest a title(CSS-1982)

Objectives pursued by, organisations should be directed to the satisfaction of demands resulting from the wants of mankind. Therefore, the determination of appropriate objectives for organised activity must be preceded by an effort to determine precisely what their wants are.Industrial organisations conduct market studies to learn what consumer goods should be produced. City Commissions make surveys to ascertain what civic projects would be of most benefit. Highway Commissions conduct traffic counts to learn what constructive programmes should be undertaken. Organisations come into being as a means for creating and exchanging utility. Their success is dependent upon the appropriateness of the series of acts contributed to the system. The majority of these acts is purposeful, that is, they are directed to the accomplishment of some objective. These acts are physical in nature and find purposeful employment in the alteration of the physical environment. As a result utility is created, which,through the process of distribution, makes it possible for the cooperative system to endure.
Before the Industrial Revolution most cooperative activity was accomplished in small owner-managed enterprises, usually with a single decision maker and simple organisational objectives. Increased technology and the growth of industrial organisations made necessary the establishment of a hierarchy of objectives. This, in turn, required a divison of the management, function until today a hierarchy of decision maker exists in most organisations..The effective pursuit of appropriate objectives contributes directly the organisational efficiency. As used here, efficiency is a measure of the want satisfying power of the cooperative system as a whole. Thus efficiency is the summation of utilities received from the organisation divided by the utilities given to the organisation, as subjectively evaluated by each contributor.The function of the management process is the delineation of organisational objectives and the coordination of activity towards the accomplishment of these objectives. The system of coordinated activities must be maintained sothateach contributor, including the manager, gains more than he contributes.

@ Chilli:

Appropriate objectives of an organisation are required to fulfill the needs of mankind so these needs should be determined first. Orgaisations are founded for the creation and exchange of some useful thing and their success depends upon the appropriate choice of acts which alter the physical environment. The distribution of the resultant beneficial stuff ensures the continuity of the co-operative system. Prior to Industrial Revolution, the co-operative activity could be achieved by single decision-makers with simple objectives. But with the industrial and technological advancement, a number of decision-makers are required for achieving a chain of objectives. Thus, selection of appropriate objectives yields greater efficiency of an organisation i.e. more output than input.

(Words: 111)

TITLE: Significance of appropriate objectives in a co-operative system



Regards,

angelfalls!!

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ENGLISH PRECIS AND COMPOSITION 2007

Q#1 Make a précis of the given passage and suggest a suitable heading.

The author of a work of imagination is trying to effect us wholly, as human beings, whether he knows it or not; and we are affected by it, as human beings, whether we intend to be or not. I suppose that everything we eat has some effect upon us than merely the pleasure of taste and mastication; it affects us during the process of assimilation and digestion; and I believe that exactly the same is true of any thing we read.
The fact that what we read does not concern merely something called our literary taste, but that it affects directly, though only amongst many other influences , the whole of what we are, is best elicited , I think, by a conscientious examination of the history of our individual literary education. Consider the adolescent reading of any person with some literary sensibility. Everyone, I believe, who is at all sensible to the seductions of poetry, can remember some moment in youth when he or she was completely carried away by the work of one poet. Very likely he was carried away by several poets, one after the other. The reason for this passing infatuation is not merely that our sensibility to poetry is keener in adolescence than in maturity. What happens is a kind of inundation, or invasion of the undeveloped personality, the empty (swept and garnished) room, by the stronger personality of the poet. The same thing may happen at a later age to persons who have not done much reading. One author takes complete possession of us for a time; then another, and finally they begin to affect each other in our mind. We weigh one against another; we see that each has qualities absent from others, and qualities incompatible with the qualities of others: we begin to be, in fact, critical: and it is our growing critical power which protects us from excessive possession by anyone literary personality. The good critic- and we should all try to critics, and not leave criticism to the fellows who write reviews in the papers- is the man who, to a keen and abiding sensibility, joins wide and increasingly discriminating. Wide reading is not valuable as a kind of hoarding, and the accumulation of knowledge or what sometimes is meant by the term ‘a well-stocked mind.’ It is valuable because in the process of being affected by one powerful personality after another, we cease to be dominated by anyone, or by any small number. The very different views of life, cohabiting in our minds, affect each other, and our own personality asserts itself and gives each a place in some arrangement peculiar to our self.
445 /3 = 148.333 (approx. 149 words Precis required)

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ANSWER OF 2007 PRECIS

EXTENSIVE READING DEVELOPS CRITICAL JUDGMENT

Any literary piece of writing has a bearing upon readers' mind as well as shapes their attitude. The degree of influence relates to the strength of author's personality reflecting through the written material and the weakness of the reader's attributes. A young reader or an old reader without sufficient reading background is more likely to be inspired by the charm of one or more than one writers. Gradually, as one's span of reading increases then he or she starts evaluating one author from another and this ability of assessment develops critical thinking, which protects one from the supremacy of any particular form of writer. Value of excessive reading is not accrual of knowledge but it is the critical judgment that sprouts from it. Hence, at a single time, multitude of opinions of different authors resides in an intellect but the reader assorts them according to his or her taste. (149 word Precis)

NEED YOUR COMMENTS, EVALUATIONS AND ANY MISTAKES (LOGICAL, GRAMMATICAL, ETC.) WOULD BE HIGHLY REGARDED.

THANKS

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@chilli
Title
Objectives and Efficiency

Objectives are important to satisfy human wants and needs.Industrial organizations and commissions are ought set the objectives through studying market and carrying surveys to fullfill human demands and create quality.In antiquated times ,there used to be one decision maker however now there is a tree of decision makers in this modern technology era.Efficiency is the desired result for these organizations and management to gain more than contribution.

Make precis of the following paragraph and suggest a suitable title

Probably the only protection for contemporary man is to discover how to use his intelligence in the service of love and kindness. The training of human intelligence must include the simultaneous development of the empathic capacity. Only in this way can intelligence be made an instrument of social morality and responsibility — and thereby increase the chances of survival. The need to produce human beings with trained morally sensitive intelligence is essentially a challenge to educators and educational institutions. Traditionally, the realm of social morality was left to religion and the churches as guardians or custodians. But their failure to fulfill this responsibility and their yielding to the seductive lures of the men of wealth and! pomp and power and documented by the history of the last two thousand years and have now resulted in the irrelevant “God Is Dead” theological rhetoric The more pragmatic men of power have had no time or inclination to deal with the fundamental problems of social morality. For them simplistic Machiavellianism must remain the guiding principle of their decisions-power is morality, morality is power. This oversimplification increases the chances of nuclear devastation. We must therefore hope that educators and educational institutions have the capacity, the commitment and the time to instill moral sensitivity as an integral part of the complex pattern of function human intelligence. Some way must be found in the training of human beings to give them the assurance to love, the security to be kind. and the integrity required for a functional empathy.

(251 words) (CSS 1979)

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