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With the invention of televisions, many forms of entertainments have been replaced. Lively programs like television serials and world news, have removed from us the need to read books or papers, to listen to radios or even to watch movies. In fact, during the 1970s, when televisions were first introduced, cinema theatres suffered great losses as many people chose to stay in the comforts of their homes to watch their favorite programs.
Indeed, the television brings the world into our house. Hence, by staying at home and pressing some buttons world happenings are immediately presented before us. Children nowadays develop faster in language, owing to the early exposure to television programs. At such tender age, it would be difficult for them to read books or papers. Thus, television programs are a good source of learning for them. Furthermore, pronunciations by the newscasters, actors or actresses are usually standardized, hence young children watching these programs will learn the 'right' pronunciations too. Owning a television is also extremely beneficial to working parents who are usually too busy or tired to take their kids out for entertainments. Surrounded by the comforts of their home, the family can have a chance to get together and watch their favorite television programs.

Of course, we should not be too carried away by the advantages of the television and overlook its negative points. Watching television programs takes away our need to read. Why bother to read the papers when we can hear them from the television news reports? Why read books when exciting movies are screened? The lack of reading is unhealthy especially to younger children as they will grow up only with the ability to speak but not write. I have a neighbor whose six-year-old child can say complete sentences like "I like cats," but when told to write out the sentence, is unable to do so. Not only are the writing skills of children affected, their thinking capacities are also handicapped. Television programs remove the need to think. The stories, ideas and facts are woven in the way television planners wanted. Exposure to such opinions and the lack of thinking opportunities will hinder the children's analyzing ability.

Despite the disadvantages of watching television programs, personally, I think that choosing the 'middle path', which is to do selective television viewing and not over indulging in the habit should be the best solution to reconcile both the merits and demerits of owning a television.









[B]Precis[/B]

Title: [B]Revolution Of Television[/B]

[CENTER]Author in this passage has expressed his thoughts of adequate and effective use of television, invention of television in late 1970's has brought great revolution i.e ease of access; equipped with many pros like broadcasting news that keeps informed of the world affairs and entertainment shows for busy households. On other hand infants can enhance speaking skills through standard means of pronunciation. Despite of pro's, writer has also brought down the cons specially writing and analytical skills of children's that could be compromised through television.[/CENTER]

(80 words)

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[QUOTE=theloyalgreen;995117]With the invention of televisions, many forms of entertainments have been replaced. Lively programs like television serials and world news, have removed from us the need to read books or papers, to listen to radios or even to watch movies. In fact, during the 1970s, when televisions were first introduced, cinema theatres suffered great losses as many people chose to stay in the comforts of their homes to watch their favorite programs.
Indeed, the television brings the world into our house. Hence, by staying at home and pressing some buttons world happenings are immediately presented before us. Children nowadays develop faster in language, owing to the early exposure to television programs. At such tender age, it would be difficult for them to read books or papers. Thus, television programs are a good source of learning for them. Furthermore, pronunciations by the newscasters, actors or actresses are usually standardized, hence young children watching these programs will learn the 'right' pronunciations too. Owning a television is also extremely beneficial to working parents who are usually too busy or tired to take their kids out for entertainments. Surrounded by the comforts of their home, the family can have a chance to get together and watch their favorite television programs.

Of course, we should not be too carried away by the advantages of the television and overlook its negative points. Watching television programs takes away our need to read. Why bother to read the papers when we can hear them from the television news reports? Why read books when exciting movies are screened? The lack of reading is unhealthy especially to younger children as they will grow up only with the ability to speak but not write. I have a neighbor whose six-year-old child can say complete sentences like "I like cats," but when told to write out the sentence, is unable to do so. Not only are the writing skills of children affected, their thinking capacities are also handicapped. Television programs remove the need to think. The stories, ideas and facts are woven in the way television planners wanted. Exposure to such opinions and the lack of thinking opportunities will hinder the children's analyzing ability.

Despite the disadvantages of watching television programs, personally, I think that choosing the 'middle path', which is to do selective television viewing and not over indulging in the habit should be the best solution to reconcile both the merits and demerits of owning a television.









[B]Precis[/B]

Title: [B]Revolution Of Television[/B]

[CENTER]Author in this passage has expressed his thoughts of adequate and effective use of television, invention of television in late 1970's has brought great revolution i.e ease of access; equipped with many pros like broadcasting news that keeps informed of the world affairs and entertainment shows for busy households. On other hand infants can enhance speaking skills through standard means of pronunciation. Despite of pro's, writer has also brought down the cons specially writing and analytical skills of children's that could be compromised through television.[/CENTER]

(80 words)

Please criticize it and give remarks[/QUOTE]
Your precis is too short also there is no need to mention writer. Read following rules
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[QUOTE=The Elegent;995129]Your precis is too short also there is no need to mention writer. Read following rules
[url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compulsory-subjects/english-precis-composition/precis/25669-rules-precis-writing.html[/url][/QUOTE]

[B]Thank you[/B] so much for giving time and support via guidance, any support is world for me.

[B]One[/B] thing more, let suppose this precis is one-third of the original passage, can you please check it further? I meant, my understanding and answer and flow of sentence? Should i go for high-pitch/advance vocabulary in replacement(Synonym) or keep it in relax and easy mode like above written precis?? and last thing i wanna ask is, can you write a short starting sentence as you said no need to mention writer.

Thanks again.

[QUOTE=theloyalgreen;995249][B]Thank you[/B] so much for giving time and support via guidance, any support is world for me.

[B]One[/B] thing more, let suppose this precis is one-third of the original passage, can you please check it further? I meant, my understanding and answer and flow of sentence? Should i go for high-pitch/advance vocabulary in replacement(Synonym) or keep it in relax and easy mode like above written precis?? and last thing i wanna ask is, can you write a short starting sentence as you said no need to mention writer.

Thanks again.[/QUOTE]

for example
"Television revolutionized the world of media"
this can be ur first sentence
Whereas ur language is concerned u dont need to go for difficult words
Just take important ideas from passage and rewrite them but be aware of maintaining flow between the thoughts. Another important thing use one word subtitutions.
Practise past papers

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[QUOTE=The Elegent;995334]for example
"Television revolutionized the world of media"
this can be ur first sentence
Whereas ur language is concerned u dont need to go for difficult words
Just take important ideas from passage and rewrite them but be aware of maintaining flow between the thoughts. Another important thing use one word subtitutions.
Practise past papers[/QUOTE]

[B]I really appreciate you, stay blessed. :) [/B]

[QUOTE=theloyalgreen;995346][B]I really appreciate you, stay blessed. :) [/B][/QUOTE]

My pleasure need prayers:)