My css precis 2017
 

Here is my Precis CSS 2017:

Elite people in this world had created problems which are mainly unresolved by them.Humanity remained a missed expression in due history. Politicans abused their powers for their own interests.They never wanted to resolve the disputes.If today European leaders understand the notion of peace then this world may be a new world.Religious leaders gathered themselves to held conferences just only to criticize woman for their dresses and dance................(74 Words)

[QUOTE=Ajan92;1053430]Sufi, Previously in an essay thread, you said that you read novels etc. Please suggest us to develop a literary style like that of yours? Detailed reply will highly be appreciated. Thanks in anticipation[/QUOTE]Good reading aids in good writing. Classical English novels definitely help in developing good writing skills. Pick any good classical English novel of a famous writer and try to emulate its style or develop your own. Choice of a novel or book depends on personal interest. However, I would recommend you to read following novels in your spare time:

1.Pursuit of Happiness
2. A Tale of Two Cities
3. Animal Farm
4. Any good book of Mark Twain and Oscar Wilde

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My precis attempt of 1993. Original text is in the picture, attached.

"According to Schumacher, secret of the success lies within the intellectual wellbeing.If one wants , humanity to achieve a harmony, then the best help in this regard would be educational or vocational training. It helps the masses to get rid of the shackles of ignorance and makes them independent. But, this odessey is full of difficulties so, it requires passion and determination to reach the destination. Because, it solely depends upon an aspirant, to convert information into knowledge and that knowledge into wisdom.Once the precious gift of knowledge is received, it must remain in use of the recipient. With all the zeal and zeast. This is the only way to utilize it for the human development."
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Kindly evaluate, I will be really thankful.

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sir, kindly point out my mistakes from grammatically point of view & also share your attempt of this precis.

[QUOTE=SYusraZRizvi;1053439]My precis attempt of 1993. Original text is in the picture, attached.

"According to Schumacher, secret of the success lies within the intellectual wellbeing.If one wants , humanity to achieve a harmony, then the best help in this regard would be educational or vocational training. It helps the masses to get rid of the shackles of ignorance and makes them independent. But, this odessey is full of difficulties so, it requires passion and determination to reach the destination. Because, it solely depends upon an aspirant, to convert information into knowledge and that knowledge into wisdom.Once the precious gift of knowledge is received, it must remain in use of the recipient. With all the zeal and zeast. This is the only way to utilize it for the human development."
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Sent from my SM-J700H using Tapatalk[/QUOTE]There are some grammatical mistakes like, improper use of articles and subject-verb disagreement. Avoid excessive use of commas.

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[QUOTE=Tooba2;1053538]sir, kindly point out my mistakes from grammatically point of view & also share your attempt of this precis.[/QUOTE]If you are asking me then, I have already analyzed your precis.

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[QUOTE=San Sufi;1053550]If you are asking me then, I have already analyzed your precis.

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Can you please guide me about how to redress my English expression. I like your expressions. How did you manage to improve in such diction. I asked thid question previously, but you did not bother to reply :(

[QUOTE=Ajan92;1053551]Can you please guide me about how to redress my English expression. I like your expressions. How did you manage to improve in such diction. I asked thid question previously, but you did not bother to reply :([/QUOTE]Yar I replied to your question. Let me see....

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[QUOTE=San Sufi;1053438]Good reading aids in good writing. Classical English novels definitely help in developing good writing skills. Pick any good classical English novel of a famous writer and try to emulate its style or develop your own. Choice of a novel or book depends on personal interest. However, I would recommend you to read following novels in your spare time:

1.Pursuit of Happiness
2. A Tale of Two Cities
3. Animal Farm
4. Any good book of Mark Twain and Oscar Wilde

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