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Title: Importance of Philosophy.

The beauty of interdisciplinary fields of study is they can overlap the beliefs, incidets and evidences very easily. Even after that every bit of knowledge is arranged in a string of pearls at such an order that it create a ease for the explorer.
Philosophy is one of the realm which holds a mastery over the other branches of knlwledge. It is not merely about history but, it also has a great to absorb the contemporary information into its vast paradigm. All the major discoveries untill now, be it the evolutionary process of the human race or the causes of past revolutions, all are the fruits of the philosophical findings. It is the only discipline which enables the individuals to question their conscience. A part from the man made priciples.



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first, You may write a rough draft before attempting to write pré·cis. ( final draft )
regardless; Title can be: "Evolution of Philosophy. "
second, You can work on your punctuation. For example, the last sentence is incomplete or it is connected with the previous one?
Third, Avoid using negative sentences.
Fourth, Words like evidence, knowledge, information and research, these words never take a plural (s). They are always singular and the verb is therefore always singular too.
Fifth, it also has great.... to absorb??? something is missing like great potential or what?
Sixth, even after that every bit of knowledge is used..... it create (s) an ease for the explorer.
Overall, language is good, but thoughts are unclear.