1990
Total words : 270
Required words: 90

After the division of the Sub- Continent. Annexation of the Princely states was the big question. Due to the demographic conditions; inclination of the sovereigns towards the India was sure. Although, Jinnah was determined to have a fair share from the partitioned land. Jodhpur was one of the unfortunate states, that were unable to enjoy the status of an Independent state. But, intergue of the Indian state along with the support of a British abettor worked well and the state became a part of the India.
(91 words)
Title: fate of the Prinicely states.

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You have missed some points in your precis. The part of Maharajah and Jinnah is also advised to be included. Their account is essential.

Title is not good as the precis is about only Jodhapur not about all princely states. So, limit your title to that. The title is the gist of whole passage, mentioning the theme in few words.

Moreover, you have made many errors of punctuation and grammar, which puts a negative image on the checker. I highlight some of them in brackets here:


After the division of the Sub- Continent. (COMMA IS REQUIRED NOT FULLSTOP) Annexation of the Princely states was the big question. Due to the demographic conditions; ( AGAIN COMMA IS NEEDED not SEMI COLON) inclination of the sovereigns towards the India was sure. Although, ( WRITE NONETHLESS or HOWEVER not ALTHOUGH WHICH IS CLAUSE Which should be supported by another INDEPENDENT CLAUSE) Jinnah was determined to have a fair share from the partitioned land. Jodhpur was one of the unfortunate states, ( COMMA IS IMPROPERLY USED here : REMOVE IT) that were unable to enjoy the status of an Independent state. But, intergue of the Indian state along with the support of a British abettor worked well and the state became a part of the India.