Precis Evaluation

[Aisha Ansari]

Respected seniors,
It is my precis attempt of initial stages. Your comments are highly appreciated. Jazak Allah!


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One of our most difficult problems is what we call discipline and it is really very complex. You see, society feels that it must control or discipline the citizen, shape his mind according to certain religious, social, moral and economic patterns.
Now, is discipline necessary at all? Please listen carefully. Don’t immediately say YES or NO. Most of us feel, especially while we are young, that there should be no discipline, that we should be allowed to do whatever we like and we think that is freedom. But merely to say that we should be free and so on has very little meaning without understanding the whole problem of discipline.
The keen athlete is disciplining himself the whole time, isn’t he? His joy in playing games and the very necessity to keep fit makes him go to bed early, refrain from smoking, eat the right food and generally observe the rules of good health. His discipline and punctuality is not an imposition but a natural outcome of his enjoyment of athletics.

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Title: Discipline: a key to success

The word 'discipline' holds a way of life. Every society ensures that its citizens conform to certain moral, religious and economic norms.
People hold a dual perception about disciple that changes with age. For youngsters, the discipline is captivity and an imposition while for adults, it as a key to success.
Every successor follows a balanced life with discipline. As, discipline life naturally leads you to the advancement rather than impediment.

[ali raza jamil]

Progressively developing societies abide by some laws to discipline its citizens. Youth being naive think that through discipline they are being denied of their right to act or think freely. We can take an example from an athletes life when he is trying to be fit while exercising going to bed early,refrain from smoking, eating right and observing rules of good health.

[ali raza jamil]

An excellent effort from your side I may say.

[Aisha Ansari]

Thank you for your precious time and encouragement.

Originally Posted by ali raza jamil

An excellent effort from your side I may say.

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