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Title:Israel occupation of Palestinian territory: a filmmaker’s perspective

Nizar Hussain, a Palestinian filmmaker, paid attention in his documentary “Independence” on the Palestinian’s opinion about their stolen homeland which Israel call the act “independence”. when the news erupted about more annexation of Palestine into Israel, the author received a mail from Nizar Hassan about his latest film, My Grandfather’s path, which was pro-Palestinian film. Nizar praised all forms of Palestinian art which saved him from the trap of Israel’s behavior due to which one’s ideas and desires can be forgotten which were dreamed. The author admires the documentary by saying that it was composed perfectly which highlighted the true spirit of Palestinians against Israel. He suggested that it would have a great impact if viewed without interruption. (118)