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I assigned the following title

ART, PASSION AND EMOTION.

I started with following words;

The intellectuals have lamented the art
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dear u have tried ur best but there were different theories/thoughts by different people like plato , shakespear etc so more suitable titlle would be THEORIES OF ART......as i have entitled my precis THEORIES AND THOUGHTS ABOUT ART still i am looking for comments of other aspirants/seniors/moderator/administrator about my precis topic but sorry to say that no single comment has been recieved yet
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I commented on your given title on 11th May but my post was deleted. There were various posts which were for the comments on each member’s given title. Problem with these posts was that I could not post one composite post comprising all the comments on all the titles in a single post. That is why my all the posts were immediately deleted by our worthy moderators. I had no time to write these in a single post because the next day morning I was to attempt my paper. Afterwards I did not find time to retype these comments.

There were more than 10 posts.

I agreed on the title which you supplied. That title seems sound.
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I agreed on the title which you supplied. That title seems sound.
thank u very much dear....as i was not getting any comments regarding topic so it was annoying............and even no expert/moderator/administer has given the title to 2009 precis yet so that candidates could get idea abt their reaspective titles of precis....thanks again
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thank u very much dear....as i was not getting any comments regarding topic so it was annoying............and even no expert/moderator/administer has given the title to 2009 precis yet so that candidates could get idea abt their reaspective titles of precis....thanks again
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Well several titles were put forward by Dr. Noor ul Ain (lala1447) in posts number 8 and 10. I think she being a topper deserves to be considered as an expert more than any of the humble moderators

So we do have the expert's title on the precis and you can deduce the idea you want for your assigned title

Moreover, Moderators are not necessarily experts in all CSS subjects. Our job description is different however we do try our best to contribute where ever we can

I hope this satisfies your concern

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i gave it the title The Nature of Art because the first part dealt with the accusations against art while the second part dealt with the authors perceptions and his justifications in favour of art.Therefore,in my opinion,Nature of Art encapsulates the topic adequately and from all angles.
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the title i assigned was ,"ART PORTRAYS MAN". hows that title ? can we give more then one ittle by mentionimg the word "or" in between them. like the way it is done in many guide books? kindly reply
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i gave it the title The Nature of Art because the first part dealt with the accusations against art while the second part dealt with the authors perceptions and his justifications in favour of art.Therefore,in my opinion,Nature of Art encapsulates the topic adequately and from all angles.
Excellent integration of the passage. I have seen very few candidates who could divide the passage like you have done in the paper. You have rightly separated the passage into two separate waves running in the same passage.
Infact author seemed convinced on the school of thought presented in the later part (specially Shakespeare’s school of thought).




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it is hidden in the last line of precis

''the conception of the fine arts''
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i think it should be titled as ART BY VARIOUS ARTISTS
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u'v done pretty well in yr precis but i'm afraid the length is not as less as it should have been. plz revise ur precis and write it again. i'm no expert of precis but its my gut feeling that this is not the prescribed length. im sure u'll have a kind attention to my mesag. dont mind plz. thats how we learn from others. by sharing experience. u must take out the redundant phrases and words and it must be as precise as u can make it,

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