One great defect of our civilization is that it does not know what to do with its knowledge. Science, as we have seen, has given us powers fit for the gods, yet we use them like small children.
For example, we do not know how to manage our machines. Machines were made to be man's servants; yet he has grown so dependent on them that they are in a fair way to become his masters. Already most men spend most of their lives looking after and waiting upon machines. And the machines are very stern masters. They must be fed with coal, and given petrol to drink, and oil to wash with, and must be kept at the right temperature. And if they do not get their meals when they expect them, they grow sulky and refuse to work, or burst with rage, and blow up, and spread ruin and destruction all round them. So we have to wait upon them very attentively and do all that we can to keep them in a good temper. Already we find it difficult either to work or play without the machines, and a time may come when they rule us altogether, just as we rule the animals.


PRECIS: We have learned everything from Science but we don't know its effective utilization. As man had made machines to do his work more effectively but now it looks like that man has became a slave of machines and always be more worried for its maintenance otherwise these machines will not be able to do the work of man. That time is not so far away, when man cannot take even a single step without these machines.

TITLE: Man's Future Masters

your extraction of gest is good, and there is coherence in you precis which is good for a good attempt.

however, just to ask, will it not be more convincing in its tone, if we write it in third person. I read somewhere about this rule.

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aoa excellent effort....
3rd person approach is better,as pointed out by Sabah.Regards

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Thanks members for your valuable suggestions and appreciation. I have also read to give a third person touch to your precis but i didnt understand it completely, please suggest me how can i make the tone of this precis according to the standards?