plz miss naqvi dont leave us the newest one in a lurch, who was also trying to be a part of this battle

Dear Members

Thanks for your kind words

@ Kashinov

I have no problem if any of you is holding it the way I tried. Yes its right that there are threads in which you can add your precis but there is not a single thread where your work is analyzed. So if Secondopinion could spare some time for the analysis of precis of the members I would be more then happy.

I m waiting for goodwill of the any other member who has mastery in analysis of precis.

I will also try my level best to participate time to time bcaz it was honour for me to run this kind of thread where css aspirants were benefited.

With Best Regards

[quote=HayatKhan]@Miss Naqvi
Its very shocking that u r going to close this thread. We were learning a lot from this thread. If you are busy for some time so its ok why not some body else like secondopinion take your ur responsibilities. He is extremely good skills in this area.
@ Secondopinion.
Well secondopinion (brother), It would be great if u can spare some time from u r busy schedule to keep this thread alive.

Best wishes[/quote]

Brother Hayat Khan

I have no problem if any other member is taking the charge and could manage to help those who are eager to learn writing skills. I m agreed to you that rather closing the thread it should be run by some other member who can do justice and have sufficient time at his/her disposal.

With Best Regards

aslam o alikum
what i heard?i m really shocked.miss naqvi is busy in her routine ,its ok.she has already done a great job for members.but what happened to secondcomming?so bad .plzzz dont leave this thread at the request of friends.hope u wil change ur decision.

Title: [U]Vain and opportunist politicians in House of Commons[/U]
[B]Precis[/B]
The writer comments on the vanity of politicians specifically of the house of commons and elaborates his views.Lord Melbourne also shares his views.In this regard,writer states that vanity prevails in house of commons everywhere and in every form.The members are true opportunists.Not only the common colleagues but the fast friends overhere never support each others' point of view.They usually hurt their very close comrades.If a colleague shows his sincerity for another one, that is also characterised by shallowness.Every member is blindly pursuing his own ulterior motives for the sake of being well known but perhaps at the top of all others.People want to be famous and therefore their commitment in every thing they do is fake.
precis words: 317
target: 106
my precis:125

precis
 

hi, You have done well but there are several things which we have to learn to do the best and exact precis of any passage.There is only need to observe the passage very very carefully then we able to short the passage.Anyhow you provide useful information about precis Thanks.
regards..

Plz Check my Precis
 

The incomparable gift of brain, with its trule amazing powers of abstractions, has renderd obsolete the slow and sometimes clumsy mechanisms utilized by evolution so far . Thanks to the brain alone , man , in the course of three generations only, has conquered the realm of air, while it took hundereds of thousands of years for animals to achive the same result through the processes of evolution . Thanks to brain alone, the range of our sonsory organs has been increased a million fold, far beyond the wildes dreams; we have brought the moon within thirty miles of us; we see the infinietly samall and see the infinitely remote; we hear the inaudible; we have dwarfed distance and killed physical time . we have succeeded in understanding them thoroughly . we have put shame the tedious and time-consuming methods of trail and error used by Nature, because Nature has finally succeeded in producing its, masterpieces in the shape of the human brain . But the great laws of evolution are still active, even though adaptation has lost its importance as far as we are concerned . we are now responsible for the progress of evolution. we are free to destroy overselves if we misunderstand the meaning and the purpose of our victories and we are free to forge ahead, to prolong evolution, to cooperate with God if we percieve the meaning of it all, if we realize tha it can only be achived through a whole hearted affor towards moral and spiritual development . Our freedom, of whic we may be jutsly proud affords us the proof that we represent affords us the proof that we represent the spearhead of evolution: but it is up to us to demonstrate, by the way which we use it , whether we are ready yet to assume the tremendous responsibility which has befallen us almost suddenly

MY Precis

Title Man in the Process fo Evolution
Man and Evolution

Man has came at the forfronts of evolution by conquering amazing feats , it is the master piece of evolutin itself, but nature is moving on it,s due course and responsibility has fallen-upon man that how he adjusts himself in this process and aids it. A slight mistake can rendor a huge loss , a great with is required to stear itself to the right path

mis Naqvi,Hamayun and nosheen well done.
All of three headings are good but I will prefer the Title proposed by Miss Naqvi "Baseless Vain/Pride of english MP's"
well done...
I will post one Precise today...
I will need your support.I hope you will....

:8: Miss_Naqvi i simply salut for you excellent intiative and carrying it out till conclusion, it really helped me to practice precis writing the area where i am feeling really confuzed. thanx once again. other members too deserve appreciation for their effort. remember first step is equally important towards the success as the final one.

Title: Vain and opportunist politicians in House of Commons
Precis
The writer comments on the vanity of politicians specifically of the house of commons and elaborates his views.Lord Melbourne also shares his views.In this regard,writer states that vanity prevails in house of commons everywhere and in every form.The members are true opportunists.Not only the common colleagues but the fast friends overhere never support each others' point of view.They usually hurt their very close comrades.If a colleague shows his sincerity for another one, that is also characterised by shallowness.Every member is blindly pursuing his own ulterior motives for the sake of being well known but perhaps at the top of all others.People want to be famous and therefore their commitment in every thing they do is fake.


@ DEAR QURAT....i would like to know from you that can we say like this that this author says or according to author,in preci writing.? like you mentioned that the author commented etc etc...


miss naqvi, i on behalf of all members implore you to join us again and resume your precious work...i hope you will consider our request...

Kamran MAlik
 

i have seen your work now and it is to be appreciated that you are helping us in this manner. i would submit my work by tomorrow.