Plz check my first precis
 

this is my very first precis.i dont know whether i have fully understand the text or not ,dont know my grammatical mistakes.help me.

weak in precis writing.suggest ways to improve.


Precis 2013


Culture and Social structure
Culture has two major aspects i.e external and formal aspect. The external aspect is an advance form of formal aspect. Both these components have derived from the succeeding social structure. Social structure and culture are interrelated as changes in one has influenced the other. Therefore social and cultural problems are interconnected and cannot be dealt separately. These problems have arisen as a result of domination of colonial-imperialism and outdated social structure. those countries where imperialism prevailed had developed the culture of feudalism and tribalism. The growth in these countries, social or cultural, were halted until they were politically freed. Feudal culture was limited to a particular class while the tribal was not. Colonialism-Imperialism have both emphasized on the division of society. Our society has inherited this social structure from our predecessors.

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Culture has two major aspects, i.e. external and formal aspect. The external aspect is an advance form of formal aspect. Both these components have derived from the succeeding social structure. Social structure and culture are interrelated as changes in one has influenced the other. Therefore, social and cultural problems are interconnected and cannot be dealt separately. These problems have aroused as a result of domination of colonial-imperialism and outdated social structure. Those countries where imperialism prevailed had developed the culture of feudalism and tribalism. The growth in these countries, social or cultural, were halted until they were politically freed. Feudal culture was limited to a particular class while the tribal was not. Colonialism-Imperialism have both emphasized the division of society. Our society has inherited this social structure from our formers.

plz eveluate it

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so where is your original passage dear???without that no one can help you...

good start. keep it up

i have written thats it is Precis 2013 means From Precis and composition paper 2013 sorry shahid ma samji sab samaj jain gay any way


Original passage:Precis of CSS 2013 paper
Culture, in human societies, has two main aspects; an external, formal aspect and an inner, ideological aspect. The external forms of culture, social or artistic, are merely an organized expression of its inner ideological aspect, and both are an inherent component of a given social structure. They are changed or modified when this structure. They are changed and modified when this structure is changed or modified and because of this organic link they also help and influence such changes in their parent organism. Cultural Problems, therefore, cannot be studied or understood or solved in isolation from social problems, i.e. problems of political and economic relationships. The cultural problems of the underdeveloped countries, therefore, have to be understood and solved in the light of larger perspective, in the context of underlying social problems. Very broadly speaking, these problems are primarily the problems of arrested growth; they originate primarily from long years of imperialist-Colonialist domination and the remnants of a backward outmoded social structure. This should not require much elaboration European Imperialism caught up with the countries of Asia, Africa or Latin America between the sixteenth and nineteenth centuries. Some of them were fairly developed feudal societies with ancient traditions of advanced feudal culture. Others had yet to progress beyond primitive pastoral tribalism. Social and cultural development of them all was frozen at the point of their political subjugation and remained frozen until the coming of political independence. The culture of these ancient feudal societies, in spite of much technical and intellectual excellence, was restricted to a small privileged class and rarely intermingled with the parallel unsophisticated folk culture of the general masses. Primitive tribal culture, in spite of its child like beauty, had little intellectual content. Both feudal and tribal societies living contagiously in the same homelands were constantly engaged in tribal, racial and religious or other feuds with their tribal and feudal rivals. Colonialist – imperialist domination accentuated this dual fragmentation, the vertical division among different tribal and national groups, the horizontal division among different classes within the same tribal or national groups. This is the basic ground structure, social and cultural, bequeathed to the newly liberated countries by their former over lords.


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Culture and Social structure
Culture has two major aspects i.e external and formal aspect. The external aspect is an advance form of formal aspect. Both these components have derived from the succeeding social structure. Social structure and culture are interrelated as changes in one has influenced the other. Therefore social and cultural problems are interconnected and cannot be dealt separately. These problems have arisen as a result of domination of colonial-imperialism and outdated social structure. those countries where imperialism prevailed had developed the culture of feudalism and tribalism. The growth in these countries, social or cultural, were halted until they were politically freed. Feudal culture was limited to a particular class while the tribal was not. Colonialism-Imperialism have both emphasized on the division of society. Our society has inherited this social structure from our predecessors.

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