I have been told so many times to put an essay on cssforum and now for the first tym m gonna start my essay. Please check it and inform me about the mistakes.

Education Starts at Home

. Responsibilities of parents
. Guiding children and giving them instructions
. Providing them with toys that may help them in learning
. Helping children in their homework
. Story telling
. Conclusion

A mother is the first teacher of her children. It is an open secret that parents are responsible for the education and character building of their children. Character, of course can be built by educating children at home, through lessons of morality and good deeds in an early stage of a child's learning process.
The way parents perform their day to day operations at home, the way they speak to their children and instruct them, influences children's behavior a lot. As this is the very beginning stage of their learning, the children try to copy their parents and perform some actions in the same way as they have seen their parents performing those actions. For exemple, when some guests arrive at their home, the way the parents react to their arrival and the way they interact their children with the quests, leaves a great impression on children's memory and in this way the chuldren are tought, though indirectly, how to react when some one arrives and how to interact with him.
Children can be tought by providing them with such type of toys that may help them in learning new things. Some toys can help children in memorizing numbers and alphabes and some of them may be helpful for them in remembering names of certain household items, plants, birds, animals and vice versa.
Helping children in doing their homework not only improve their academic record but also develop a cordial relationship witch is very essential for their intellectual growth. This is the formal srage of learning at home. A this stage, parents are not supposed to hand over their responsibility of educating children fully to their teachers as mentioned earlier a mother is the first teacher of her children. A friendly relationship witch is developed through helping children in doing their homework can keep them away from bad companies.
Educating children at home means educating them about good and bad deeds that is character building. Story telling is one of the best recommended exercises for developing moral qualities in children. Telling children moral and ethical stories, the stories of intellectuals and people of noble deeds not only help them in distinguishing between good and bad but also creating their own image as the hero of the story.
In a nut shell, parents are the first and true educatoinalists for their children. Children initially think what their parents make them think and they behave and react in particular circumstances in the same way as their parents behaved and reacted in those circumstances. As children spend most of the time of their childhood with their parents at home, the actual education starts from home.

It seems like you wrote an essay on Responsibilities of parents

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oh u made me realise this. would u like to gv me any hint how to make it relevant ?

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you have made a brief outline before writing the essay, which makes it confusing; is it short note or long essay ? The number of words suggests that it's short essay wheras the outline given can only be written in long essay. So, you need to organise your topic according to the requirement and try to be more relevant to the topic asked, as pointed out by a lady in earlier comments.

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ok and what about language used in this essay i mean is that standard or too simple ? Kindly notify me if there is any grammatical mistake/mistakes

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consult a good teacher for essay ......
consult sir kashif rehman....

In CSS the quality of essay relies on your arguments, so focus on writing skills. Afterwards focus on the body of essay either you go with or against the topic. Please read the essay by senior member on forum and it will help you brainstorming. Don't be reluctant to post your essay, the expert at anything was once a beginner.

Do not be discouraged for what you are about to read. It is for your own benefit. I will give it to you straight: you will not pass CSS ESSAY paper IF you produce this kind of an Essay. ...Why? Because:

1. The topic in itself is limiting.

2. You have to defend your stance by giving arguments and real life examples in favour of your stance which are lacking here.

3. The length is too short. Essay is definately longer.

4. What you have written is too simple! This level of essay can be accepted at school or at most college level. This is too basic and unsophisticated in thoughts and arguments as well as style of writing for even Masters level, let alone sufficing for CSS exam.

Please read some quality essays and literary works written by some famous writers like Francis Bacon, Bernard Shaw, Bertrand Russell, etc. columns in The Dawn or other qulaity newspapers so that with time you may start acquiring a professional, eloquent academic style of writing which will not only help you in essay but all other papers too.

The key is not to let your essay be too simple nor do you have to write shakespearian english. Read quality material and try to imitate the writing style you find therein.

InshaAllah with constant practice of both reading and writing you will start improving and will definately pass the Essay paper.

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Tankew so much 2 awl af u. U ppl really helped me a lot.

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