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Old Monday, June 01, 2015
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Every Pakistani remembers the Saying of our Great leader Quaid e Azam Muhammad Ali Jinnah, Faith, Unity, and Union. But unfortunately these words are limited to our books and its looks pretty in schools and in government institutions. Had Quaid e Azam saying’s saying is just to write or memorize?
Since my childhood I have seen many governments and studied many Pak affairs, I have never ever seen Unity, Faith and discipline among our politician and in their politics. If I talk about our four Provinces, Sindh, Punjab, Balauchistan and Kpk, same situation is there. I myself want to see our Pakistan as a one nation with unity, love, harmony among them and I believe every Pakistani would think like me.
Let me discuss current situation of our provinces one by one, Balauchistan, Pakistan’s largest province by area and richest in minerals. But my heart weeps when I see our baloch brother situations. They are deprived of all basic necessities of life, water, food, shelter, gas and electricity. I will not talk about education and luxuries which is unique for them. So my Question is from our leaders what’s their guilt, Why they are deprived from even basic necessities of life? They give us coal for electricity, fuel for vehicles and other minerals for our industries is that their Guilt? They give us light but why they don’t have ? They give us gas but why they don’t have gas for cocking? Who well answer to these questions? And to whom I ask these questions?
And when they blast the gas pipelines then government officials says there is involvement of an Indian Raw agency and other extremist groups. Their motive is to separate this part from Pakistan or weakens Pakistan by spreading the disease of inferiority of complex into them and that’s reality and for extremist there is suitable able environment they have to just add fuels to the flames. So are we waiting for another 1971, in the shape of Balochistan?
Sindh’s situation is not more different than Balochistan. There’s the politician and their politics is limited to Karachi …………………………………………. Continue
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Well, good attempt but keep practice of writing.

Every citizen of Pakistan learn about the saying of our Great leader, Quaid-e-Azam Mohammad Ali jinnah: Faith, Unity and Discipline.
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U need much improvement in expression, grammar, and punctuation. Keep writing...
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Improvement is required...
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