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INTRODUCTION
Terrorism can be defined as the violence.It might be political or social violence to spread fear to achieve personal gains.Pakistan has been facing menace of terrorism since its inception in direct or indirect way but it has further fuelled the fire since 9/11 incident,which is disrupting its economic development,erroding social situation,intensifying security situation and depriciating its integrity as well.Terrorism is the outcome of combination of multiple factors ranging from internal situation (political instablity,social stratification,economic equality) to external developments.
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INTRODUCTION
Terrorism can be defined as the violence. {,} {either} It might be political or social violence to spread fear to {attain vested interests}achieve personal gains.Pakistan has been facing menace of terrorism since its inception in direct or indirect way but it has further }adding fuel to the fire}fuelled the fire since {the incident of 9/11 incident,which is disrupting its economic development,erroding social situation,intensifying security situation and depriciating its integrity as well.Terrorism is the outcome of combination of multiple factors ranging from internal situation (political instablity,social stratification,economic equality) to external developments.
I have gone through your write up, you need to use appropriate vocabulary and also improve your expressions. Apart from minor mistakes it is a good effort. Keep writing practice as much as you can to come up with a good result.
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