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Pollution and ways to combat it
Pollution and ways to combat it
Outline 1. Pollution-an introductory view 1.1. Major kinds of pollution 1.1.1. Air pollution 1.1.2. Soil Pollution 1.1.3. Water Pollution 1.2. Noise pollution-an emerging concept 1.3. Pollution-an upcoming threat for the planet 2. Causes of pollution-for remedies we must know 3. Detrimental effects- why is the stalemate necessary to pollution 4. Pragmatic ways to combat it- a way forward 5. Conclusion-an end but not an end in itself rather a beginning |
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Comment please
Comment please for an essay of 40 marks.
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Examiner don't have enough time to go through every paper thoroughly, i am saying this based on the papers he checked this year, he goes through the papers of those candidates who have potential in their outline. your outline consist 9 segments that are related to pollution only, instead the essay requires ways to combat it. This is the main mistake you have committed.
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First of all thank you, of course he is more concerned to the ways to combat.
Sir, it's 40 marks essay NOT 100. Secondly, some seniors recommend short outline rather longer one but the logic you've suggested is really appealing. Although I wrote a longer outline on rough but while copying, I just shortened it for the sake of experiment as some of the qualifiers suggest so. However, I qualified PMS as well as CE-2015 Essays with long outlines rather shorter one which rationally follows your suggestion.
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Marking it out of 40 then you won't get 16 because majority of your topic is on 'pollution' rather than on the 'ways to combat it.'
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Thank you so much for an expertview
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welcome.
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