Islam versus West
 

Please seniors check my outline and give your precious suggestions
1.Introduction
1.1 misconceptions in west about islam
1.2 the reservations of muslims regarding west
1.3 gulf between islam and west is widening
2.Islamophobia of he west
2.1 Fear of "Jihadi Terrorism"
2.2 Every bearded man and veiled woman is branded as a terrorist
3. Causes of Islamophobia of the west
3.1 The extremism of Taliban and 9/11 attacks
3.2 Terrorism spread by ISIS in the name of Islam
3.3 Terrorist attacks around the globe usually carried out by Muslims eg Paris attacks
4. Muslim attitude towards the west
4.1 Mistrust and in extreme cases hatred towards the west
4.2 American involvement in Iraq,Syria and Afghanistan has strengthened these beliefs
5. Causes of Muslim attitude
5.1 Insult of Prophet Muhammed (S.A.W) by cartoonists in the name of freedom of speech
5.2 Rascist attitude shown by the West
5.3 Anti-Muslim rhetoric of politicians like Donald Trump
6. The consequences of mistrust between the Muslims and the West
6.1 Migrants from Syria paying the price
6.2 Defamation of Islam on a global sccale
6.3 Rascist attitude faced by Muslim community in the west
7. Solution
7.1 A forum should be made where Muslims can discuss there grievances
7.2 Western governments should redress the Muslim grievances
7.3 Positive meaning and message of Islam should be spread in the west
7.4 Muslim clerics should oppose terrorist organisations and educate muslims against joining them

please someone suggest improvements in this essay

[B]1)[/B] Give Conclusion instead solutions.
[B]2)[/B] As you're comparing both Islam & West, you should put information according to following standard structure for: [U][B]Compare & Contrast type of the Essay[/B].[/U]

[B]* Introduction[/B]
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[B]* Conclusion[/B]

[QUOTE=mustansar~hussain;886408][B]1)[/B] Give Conclusion instead solutions.
[B]2)[/B] As you're comparing both Islam & West, you should put information according to following standard structure for: [U][B]Compare & Contrast type of the Essay[/B].[/U]

[B]* Introduction[/B]
[B]* Body[/B]
[B] [COLOR="Teal"]Subject A — Point #1[/COLOR][/B] _____________
Supporting detail ____________
Example __________________

[B][COLOR="Blue"]Subject B — Point #1 [/COLOR][/B] ________________
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[B]* Conclusion[/B][/QUOTE]
Solutions should also be given.Conclusion can be given after solution

it is a very long essay. Shorten it. You may have not that much time to write it effectively.
Regards.