anticipation is often greater than realization

outline:

1-Introduction
2-Meaning of proverb
3-A long desire for something diminishes the realization
4-greater Anticipation and reduced realization At individual level
a)on eid
b)on marriage of siblings/relatives
c)on vacations/after exams
d)for rain
5-At state level
a-A long desire of politicians to rule the government
b-public's long desire of seeing the reduction in prices
6-Conclusion


i have made a rough outline on this topic, Any kind of advice or criticism is appreciated...

It is a nice outline, covering most of the topic and all the points are relevant in it.

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does a short outline in essay paper is considered a trouble?? i mean is it necessary to write a brief and long outline ??or a short and simple outline can fetch us good marks ??

The limit, according to a teacher in an academy, is that your outline should be atleast one page and reach maximim of 2.5 pages.
But, I think if your points are relevant then it doesn't matter a lot. If you are not sure about the relevance and quality of your points then reach the extreme limit of outline.

What would be your points in the second essay of this thread?

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1. Introduction

• Anticipation and Realization: Defined and Differentiated
• Anticipating more is present in human nature
• Meaning of the proverb
• Thesis statement: Anticipation is often greater than realization

2.Why anticipation often exceeds realization?

• Humans anticipate on the basis of past realizations
• The joy of anticipating more from anything
• Anticipating more due to higher expectations from something

3. Anticipation being more in many aspects of life

• Anticipating greater more at individual level from people: Spouse, Children, Parents, Friends, Colleagues, etc..
• Anticipation greater in Professional lives of people than realization: In offices, sports, multinational organizations, Politics, etc.
• Anticipating more from an outcome than its realization: Rain, result, cure, cooperation,matches in sports, etc.
• Anticipation being more in Animals than realization. Example of pets.

4. Historically, Humans have the tendency of anticipating more

• Literature of every society portrays it
• Traditional and Cultural sayings
• Wars depicted different anticipations of two rivals.
• Movies: e.g. 'Back to the Future' anticipated more than the realization society has in 2015
• Political History

5. How greater Anticipation produces several results in life once realizations are realized

• Negative Realizations
  • Loss of enthusiasm, war, money, resources, etc.
  • 9/11, APC incident, Rise of ISIS, etc.
• Positive Realizations
  • Safety to nation due to successful anticipation of security agencies
• Unexpected Realizations

6. How humans endeavour to tackle the negatives

• Balancing the gap between anticipation and realization
• Learning from the errors
• Correcting historically committed flaws by not anticipating greater

7. conclusion

• Summary
• Anticipation is often greater than realization

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Anticipation is often greater than realization

Introduction
Hope or anticipation is the driving force of life on earth. The man is alive because he hopes; it is the expectation of greater realization of dreams that every individual, society and state works and plans for future even when the chances of success are bleak. The whole life is about the struggle for greater realization. People make relations, love bonds, invest money in business, and try hard to achieve higher status; all in pursuit of a life happier and richer than the one that exists. But after reaching their desired points they get that their dreams were wonderlands and realities cannot be as much beautiful as expected. People anticipate a perfect result of an effort but perfection is nearly impossible. Dreams and ideas, when realized, always deliver less than the expectations; the industrial revolution was seen as a great hope for alleviation of poverty and work load, when realized, it made the life a struggle for power. However, low level of realization does not mean disappointment but it is a reflection that tells us how far we have to go to achieve our purpose. Greater hopes and lesser realization most often work as a motivation for more efforts for greater gains.

Please, evaluate how it is.

in the introduction you are defining and interpreting the proverb, I think no need to do this. start directly writing about the realities and what you feel is true or not.the outline is good but ideas are scattered, put point no 4 before point no 3. I can not understand 'negative realizations', rise of ISIS or 9/11 were the acts of terrorists and they wanted to spread anarchy, they were more than successful in their aims . please elaborate this point.

Security agencies didn't anticipate more to foresee such uprisals and terrorist attacks, this is why the realizations of their rise is due to failed anticipation.
Thanks for reviewing.

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Very well written. I would rate is as very good. But in the end you should have mentioned or written the thesis that anticipation if often greater than realization. Good work waqar bhai.

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thank you ambivalent! upload your introduction and conclusion. I will write the essay and outline tomorrow inshAllah than we will discuss in detail