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Essay paper demands thorough and well-researched knowledge about the topic a candidate selects. Knowledge of any topic, though, has no limits. But, it can be divided into several sections and parts which can prove helpful in essay paper for aspirants. I want this new thread be the platform where we can discuss about the parameters of topics, the several sections into which topics can be divided, the different angles one can take on a topic, and, most importantly, the relevance of points. This will at least cover the relevance section of the essay, whereas coherence and organisation will be discussed after making ourselves clear about the relevance part.


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The war on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of Human Rights.
Now what would be the points that would be relevant to this topic?
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The war on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights.

Content to write in this essay.
-Short definition and explanation of war on Terror, and Human rights.
-The current war on terror: Pakistan, Afghanistan, Iraq, Syria, Africa, etc.
-The going on abuse of human rights: How women, minorities, children, elder, citizens, etc. go through the problems of abuse of human rights. Give examples of each, IDPs, Muhajareen, Locals people affected, Violence, Rapes, Honour killings, etc.

-Contribution of war on terror to this growing abuse.
-What are the contributions of war on terror to this growing abuse. Give all the contributions. 1. US's War in Iraq lead to the Abuse of human rights
-Then explain how it is contributing one by one: 1. Iraq's war lead to large scale sectarian conflict contributing largely to the growing abuse of human rights there.
Continue adding 15 or 20 points to make your essay healthier.
Other points can be:
2. War on terror in Afghanistan and its contribution to the growing abuse of human rights.
3. Pakistan.
4. Africa.
5. Innocents teased and their rights violated in US and Europe over security issues due to War on Terror.


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The war on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights


1) Introduction
2) War on Terrorism
3) What are Human Rights?
4) War on Terrorism & Human Rights Abuses
A) Violation of Political & Social Rights
a) Loss of Life
b) Arbitrary Detentions
c) Extraordinary Renditions
d) Denial of Right to Petition
e) Repressive laws
f) Suppression of Freedom of Expression
g) Discriminations
h) Invasion of Privacy
I) Sexual Assault
B) Education
C) Demolition of Social Infrastructure
5) Violations of Human Rights in Pakistan
6) Is there any Alternate to the WOT?
7) Role of Civil Society & Media
8) Recommendations
9) Conclusion


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The war on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights


1) Introduction
2) War on Terrorism
3) What are Human Rights?
4) War on Terrorism & Human Rights Abuses
A) Violation of Political & Social Rights
a) Loss of Life
b) Arbitrary Detentions
c) Extraordinary Renditions
d) Denial of Right to Petition
e) Repressive laws
f) Suppression of Freedom of Expression
g) Discriminations
h) Invasion of Privacy
I) Sexual Assault
B) Education
C) Demolition of Social Infrastructure
5) Violations of Human Rights in Pakistan
6) Is there any Alternate to the WOT?
7) Role of Civil Society & Media
8) Recommendations
9) Conclusion


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Is the solution or recommendation part necessary to be inserted in every essay?
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Yes,solution oriented approach is neccessary for a balanced essay
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Anticipation is often greater than realization.
What should be the contents for this essay?
Mustansar, exclusive, musman, zubair, and all others.
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if think "economic loss" due to war on terror can be added here.

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if think "economic loss" due to war on terror can be added here.

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Economic data published by MOF in economic survey, last chapter, it provides data about economic loss caused by "war on terror"

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Economic data published by MOF in economic survey, last chapter, it provides data about economic loss caused by "war on terror"

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I think if you can connect the economic losses to human rights abuse then its okay otherwise writing it simply would b irrelevant then.
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