Originally Posted by Jabbar Raheem

Impressive.. But what a coincidence, 80% of references, from WE Henley's Invictus to Walt Whitman's O my captain, from iqbal's suraaghe zindagi to Goethe's Dr Faust, are quoted by me too... I'm waiting for an English literature professor to check my essay...
But Paper this time was Current Affair oriented and it perplexes me, who will check topic 2?

Originally Posted by Jabbar Raheem

I have one reservation though after reading it thoroughly...
It seems you have moulded the arguments to support your references and not otherwise...
outline seems rich in substance but at the cost of connectivity...
Had you adopted similar approach in your previous attempts?

Originally Posted by anabiya mughal

Great Very nice outline, please share with us your strategy to tackle essay.

Originally Posted by highly uploaded

World as a Global Village: Learning to Live together.
1. Introduction
a. Globalization & Global Village
b. Living together in a Global Village
2. Efforts of ancient societies for living together
3. Synergy of globalization & life in learning
4. Where learning takes place through globalization, leads life more closer
a. Easing Domestic Front
b. Increasing Online communities
c. Empowered education institutions
5. Factors of Globalization influencing living together
a. Social
b. Liberalism
c. Cultural diffusion
d. Formation of collective norms
e. Predictable attitudes
6. Afflictions of globalization
a. Social isolation
b. Social Network horror
c. Depression
d. Unemployment
7. Future of living together in a global village
8. Implications
9. Recommendations
10. Conclusion

Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar

We have to learn to be our best friends because we fall too easily in the trap of being our worst enemies

Introduction

Change the changeable,accept the unchangeable and remove yourself from the unacceptable. (Denis Waitley)

~There are two wolves inside a man,one is good and the other is evil.Good one feeds on love,peace etc and the evil feeds on hatred,malice etc.

~Qualities of best friend.

~Difference between friend and enemy.


~Some friends are disguised enemies

~How can one become his own friend

A friend in need is a friend indeed

~Self Love

Keats' quote,"Love is my religion.I can even die for it"

~Self Evaluation

Khudi mein doob ker paa ja suragh e zindagi,
Tu ager mera nahi banta tou na ban,apna tou ban(Iqbal)

(Dive into the ocean of your 'self' to understand life.It doesn't matter if you don't become mine,at least become your own)

~Refine short comings,groom personality.

Kaalay mainday kapray ty kala mainda wais
Gunaheen bharya mein phiraan ty lok kehn darwesh(baba fareed)

My appearance is black so people consider me a saint while the reality is that I am full of sins.

~Self Realization

I am captain of my ship.I am master of my fate.

~Purgation and purification.

Sufi poets emphasize on purification of heart and soul.

Tasbeeh phiri ty dil na phirya ki lena tasbeeh pharh k hoo?(sultan bahu)

If reciting the holy verses doesn't change the heart then there is no need to hold tasbeeh.

~What is enmity with one own self?

Hatred,malice, evil

(My own poetry)

In pieces my soul is torn
but I have no time to mourn
Hatred,malice,envy and lies
On my soul like baboes rise

~Reference of Doctor Faustus.He sells his soul to Mephistophilis to fulfill his materialistic pursuits.

~Reference of Raja Gidh.Seemi let Qayyum exploit her physically.
Qayyum chooses evil himself and his next generation suffers from madness.

~Holy Prophet PBUH says,

A man is known by his company.

~War,violence

Reference of Parabhakar Bagurde's poem "Revolution"

Don't be in a hurry for revolution
You are still very small
Your ability to resist
Atrocities, boycotts and rapes
That go on every moment
Has become nill
Comrade!
Tomorrow's sun is yet to rise
Sleep undisturbed until then


This is what I remember.May be there are some more points that I have forgot.

P.S: It's my 3rd attempt.I passed essay in my both attempts by securing 45 & 54 respectively.

Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar

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Originally Posted by neversaynever

your essay is full of extremes from iqbal to fareed and religion to raja gidh etc it seemed more of a catharsis than an essay.Despite these microscopic lacunae it is 1 of the best essay so far over here.

Originally Posted by Jabbar Raheem

Isn't it
I am captain of my 'soul'?

Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar

We have to learn to be our best friends because we fall too easily in the trap of being our worst enemies

Introduction

Change the changeable,accept the unchangeable and remove yourself from the unacceptable. (Denis Waitley)

~There are two wolves inside a man,one is good and the other is evil.Good one feeds on love,peace etc and the evil feeds on hatred,malice etc.

~Qualities of best friend.

~Difference between friend and enemy.


~Some friends are disguised enemies

~How can one become his own friend

A friend in need is a friend indeed

~Self Love

Keats' quote,"Love is my religion.I can even die for it"

~Self Evaluation

Khudi mein doob ker paa ja suragh e zindagi,
Tu ager mera nahi banta tou na ban,apna tou ban(Iqbal)

(Dive into the ocean of your 'self' to understand life.It doesn't matter if you don't become mine,at least become your own)

~Refine short comings,groom personality.

Kaalay mainday kapray ty kala mainda wais
Gunaheen bharya mein phiraan ty lok kehn darwesh(baba fareed)

My appearance is black so people consider me a saint while the reality is that I am full of sins.

~Self Realization

I am captain of my ship.I am master of my fate.

~Purgation and purification.

Sufi poets emphasize on purification of heart and soul.

Tasbeeh phiri ty dil na phirya ki lena tasbeeh pharh k hoo?(sultan bahu)

If reciting the holy verses doesn't change the heart then there is no need to hold tasbeeh.

~What is enmity with one own self?

Hatred,malice, evil

(My own poetry)

In pieces my soul is torn
but I have no time to mourn
Hatred,malice,envy and lies
On my soul like baboes rise

~Reference of Doctor Faustus.He sells his soul to Mephistophilis to fulfill his materialistic pursuits.

~Reference of Raja Gidh.Seemi let Qayyum exploit her physically.
Qayyum chooses evil himself and his next generation suffers from madness.

~Holy Prophet PBUH says,

A man is known by his company.

~War,violence

Reference of Parabhakar Bagurde's poem "Revolution"

Don't be in a hurry for revolution
You are still very small
Your ability to resist
Atrocities, boycotts and rapes
That go on every moment
Has become nill
Comrade!
Tomorrow's sun is yet to rise
Sleep undisturbed until then


This is what I remember.May be there are some more points that I have forgot.

P.S: It's my 3rd attempt.I passed essay in my both attempts by securing 45 & 54 respectively.

Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar

Whatever it's! I didn't quote it with inverted commas.It was in my mind so I used it without mentioning name of the poet.Whether I wrote 'soul' or 'ship' I'm not sure but it was quite relevant to my argument.