Seniors, please assess my outline "The suffering Soul in the Scientific Age"
 

"The suffering Soul in the Scientific Age"

Outline:

1. Introduction

2. Scientific Age and its repercussions:

a) Rapid Industrialization and hegemony of developed countries
b) Weaponization and sense of insecurity
c) Nuclearization and its dreadful consequences
d) Weapons of Mass Destruction (WMD) and toothless Control Regimes
e) Heavy expenditure on "Science and Technology" by sidelining sustainable development
f) Strain on resources for Human Development

3. Suggestions to minimize the pain of suffering soul in the Scientific Age:

a) Focus on Human Development - Poverty, education, health
b) Role of International Community to mobilize efforts to end rapid nuclearization and weaponization
c) Budgetary cuts on production and acquisition of weapons
d) Promote a culture of peace and harmony by limiting reprehensible scientific advancement
e) Role of CSOs

4. Conclusion

Please, assess my outline, seniors and professionals :( ...