World as a Global Village: Learning to live together

(1) Introduction
(2) World's march towards Global Village

• Commerce & trade
• Silk Route established
• Sea routes
• Voyages undertaken by Columbus/ vasco dagama
• Commercial pursuits resulted in social/cultural intermingling
• Imperialism
• Proselytizing campaigns
• Post colonial world order based on international institutions
(3) How world is learning to live together
(3.1) Formation of Nation-States: ground rules for international conduct, rights and Duties
(3.2) Fostering & promoting multiculturalism
(3.3) Cultural & Educational exchange programs
(3.4) Representation & Role in international multilateral organization such as WTO, UNO,IMF & others as a means to have say in issues of common concern

(4) Why World Should learn to live together
(4.1) Common security threat requires joint, collaborative action that can only be possible if states learn to live together in cordial manner
(4.2) Issues of climate change requires well coordinated, joint action plan by national governments for which living together in a cordial manner is a pre-requisite
(4.3) Public health issues: fighting Ebola, Zika virus, and other pandemics
(4.4) Commercial ties foster interdependence, which rules out escape from globalization, thus making it imperative for states to learn to live together
(5) Benefits that living together can accrue
(5.1) Poverty Reduction
(5.2) Sharing of resources
(5.3) Market efficiency
(5.4) Information revolution
(6) Hurdles that lie in the way of the world becoming a true global village
(6.1) Inadequate representation in multilateral forums(UNO,IMF,WB)
(6.2) Cultural, social, and economic disparity among the states
(6.3) Transnational terrorism
(6.4) Islamophobia/xenophobia
(7) Conclusion

your outline is good. The main thing is that you focus on the latter part

well, calculated effort

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Dear bro, your essay is elaborated and likely to far fetched you good marks. However, let me share with you some of your shortcomings so that you write an immaculate essay in your upcoming attempt.

1. Silk route has no contribution in the process of globalisation. Its a term that can aptly be used to define regionalism.
2. The voyage thing is far fledged.
3. You have altogether neglected the contribution of mass media, communication in the promotion of globalisation.
4. You have mentioned many topics but did not focused on any. You should have selected a few issues related to globalisation and discussed their causes, impacts, solution etc till the last sentence I.e climate issue, cultural issues, new world economic order

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1) Silk route does have contribution in the process of globalization. It is a historic trade route, which enabled cross national/continental interaction.
2) Voyages undertaken for commercial purposes or for imperial projects also had the same effect in the longer term and it paved way for fusion different of civilizations.
3) Agreed. But there is no need to discuss that. the thrust of the topic is on the phrase, "learning to live together" and not on the "causes of globalization"
4) I don't think that would do much to address the topic.
But anyways thanks a lot for your feedback

[QUOTE=abbas khan 119;940593]Dear bro, your essay is elaborated and likely to fetch you good marks. However, let me share with you some of your shortcomings so that you write an immaculate essay in your upcoming attempt.

1. Silk route has no contribution in the process of globalisation. Its a term that can aptly be used to
define regionalism.
so you believe a polo shirt made in Bangkadesh,ordered online to be consumed in srilanka is regionalism and not globalization?
Silk route is a historical case study to understand integration and the fruits it bore in connecting and reconnecting economies,thus giving a faint glimpse of a globalised world
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by causes and impacts I meant the same things as you have mentioned. Dont you think that the causes of different evils associated with globalisation are our reluctance to live together and follow the rule of mutual respect?
brother you mention in one part multiculrtralism, in second part ignore it and shift your focus on epidemics. In essay you have to keep your domain limited and take a clear stand. I dont know as to what was your thesis and how you substantiated it, but let me make it clear that an essay is should be done from individual point of view. You are my younger brother I shared with you what I knew about essay. Rest, choice is yours.

[QUOTE=hussy72;940614]ONLINE???? yes that is globalisation. I hope you have studied the history of globalisation. Its a latest concept and traces back to the end of cold war. A few scholors also claims there were rudiments of globalisation during the late 19th century but they are not unanimous over this issue.
The process of world's integration started with Adam & eve I hope nobody would have mentioned them. ”9ü8
we had to write an essay not a book. And in the essay too the focus was on learning to live together.

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okay brother, noted. Thanks a lot

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