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Does Foreign Aid helps to achieve economic stability?

I) Introduction:
a) Economic stability is of paramount importance in the nation's development
b) Relying on foreign aid for economic stability is an utter folly
c) Foreign aid does not serve the national interest

II) Thesis Statement:
Foreign aid makes the leadership of a country dependent and does not serve the national interest thus hampering the economic stability rather than achieving it.

III) What is an Economically Stable Nation?
a) politically sound
b) socially cohessive
c) educationally supreme

IV) Why foreign aid is incapable of achieving economic stability:
a) serves the self interest of the donor and not the national interest
b) makes the leadership of a country dependent
c) give rise to corruption
d) makes a nation stagnant as a whole

V) Foreign aid does not lead to economic stability - A Glimpse from history:
a) Pakistan has not been able to become economically stable despite heavy foreign aid
b) Japan, after WWII achieved excellence through strong political leadership and education not the foreign aid

VI) How to achieve economic stability then?
a) Independent political leadership
b) eliminating corruption
c) investing in education
d) enhancing foreign direct investment
+ two more points which I cant remember

VII) Conclusion:
a) Economic stability is the bread and butter of any nation
b) Masters of nations are needed and not the slaves of foreigners to achieve economic stability

Total Word Count: approx 2000 words
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I did the same essay but my focus was different I focused on the neo-liberal agenda, being imposed on recipient states, Washington consensus and IMF structural adjustment policies. My stand was that foreign aid is neither good nor bad; intentions of donor and character of recipient make it good or bad.

p.s: As per my understanding your essay is very good. IA you will clear it.
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This looks well thought out and comprehensive. Majority of essays I've seen from 2016 are exceptional. The contest will be tough, but I hope you'll pull through, best of luck!
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Does Foreign Aid helps to achieve economic stability?

I) Introduction:
a) Economic stability is of paramount importance in the nation's development
b) Relying on foreign aid for economic stability is an utter folly
c) Foreign aid does not serve the national interest

II) Thesis Statement:
Foreign aid makes the leadership of a country dependent and does not serve the national interest thus hampering the economic stability rather than achieving it.

III) What is an Economically Stable Nation?
a) politically sound
b) socially cohessive
c) educationally supreme

IV) Why foreign aid is incapable of achieving economic stability:
a) serves the self interest of the donor and not the national interest
b) makes the leadership of a country dependent
c) give rise to corruption
d) makes a nation stagnant as a whole

V) Foreign aid does not lead to economic stability - A Glimpse from history:
a) Pakistan has not been able to become economically stable despite heavy foreign aid
b) Japan, after WWII achieved excellence through strong political leadership and education not the foreign aid

VI) How to achieve economic stability then?
a) Independent political leadership
b) eliminating corruption
c) investing in education
d) enhancing foreign direct investment
+ two more points which I cant remember

VII) Conclusion:
a) Economic stability is the bread and butter of any nation
b) Masters of nations are needed and not the slaves of foreigners to achieve economic stability

Total Word Count: approx 2000 words
This is a well though out and comprehensive outline.
The question arises that can you justify the arguments mentioned?
I am not expert at Essay. Joined recently and started preparing.

As a friendly advice, you have compartmentalized ypur thesis statment in only economic terms. after that, you are mentioning education and social related problems.

Nowadays almost everyone know regarding aid , even the examiner. Since 1947 top economic aid receiving countries are Israel, South Korea, England, India, Turkey. How is their economic situation?
Furthermore, you have mentioned about Japan, which after WWII recieved huge economic aid to rebuild itself.

You have written really well! but again, the question arises that can you justify your argument?
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First, thanks to all for the comments
Second, you are right about the justification of arguments. This is all we have to do in writing an argumentative essay.
I tried my best to justify these arguments in the essay.
Lets see what happens.
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