It's easier for me to respond here. Plus it can help greater number of people. Please post query here.

I need to know that which book did you Refer for criminolgy . And from where have you done foreign policies of different countries in IR.

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You can check Punjab university notes on criminology. For IR prakash Chandra book is good.

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Hey Sana, can you share your approach towards the Current Affairs and Pakistan Affairs exam? Specifically what was your approach for answering questions?

May you reproduce your Essay outline for the topic: Crisis of Good Governance in Pakistan: need for reforms and institution building?

I failed this Essay in CE-2016

What went wrong with this essay. i got only 30 marks in this essay

Water crisis and national unity

'vital thousands can live without love, but no one can live without water' (british poet)

a.introduction

b.water crisis across the globe and internal and external instabilities it brings forth
bangladesh and indian water issues over farraka barrage
middle eastern water crisis (iraq ,syria ,turkey over anatolian dam ,crisis hightened in 90s when iraq syria made united front against turkey forgetting mutual rivalries )
iran afghanistan water issues over water

c.grwoing water crisis in pakistan is not a myth but reality
bbc report
khwaja asif interview quoted by n.y.t
najib suleiman , seniour energy advisor report published by express tribune

d.indian designs to strangulate pakistan through building different dams and projects
kishanga dam
baglihar
indian plans vs non seriousness of pak authorities

e. water crisis are turning for worse because of divided unity over water issues
politics of provincialism
grievances of provinces
lack of awareness

f. what ails water crisis
politics of interests
ethnic differences
financial constraints
techical constraints


g. water crisis can be solved
there i put forward different solutions ,primarily emphasid on how to bring national consensus to solve water challenges

h. conclusion
'anyone who solves water crisis should be given two nobel prizes-one for peace and one for science ' (us president)

I think your essay was primarily supposed to be about points e and f, the rest is irrelevant.

I need help evaluating my outline. Anyone please?

The essay was of general nature

Water crises and its impact on national unity

CAUSES OF WATER CRISES(domestically)
At political level

Failed policies in storage of water:

A-Dams

B-canals(blocked ways of cannals because of land mafia impact storage-create water crises)

C-rivers(lack of storage of flood water-create water crises)

D-artifical water storages lacking create water stortages

2- Failed policies in controlling water pollution create water crises

Silt,
Lack of canal lining-
Lack of availibility of clear drinking water

INTERNATIONAL CAUSES OF WATER CRISES

International political tussles
Lack of dialogues
Violation of treaties

ITS IMPACTS ON NATIONAL UNITY
Demonstrations
Protests
Sittins
Anarchy


Thats it....no point of failure of this essay

Thank you bro . Your outlines are to the point and explains central idea of the said essay. i think i missed that part in my essay