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Share outline please so that we can gauge our outline ...

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I scored 45 marks.
Please share your outline and the way you convinced the examiner. I mean, we tried our best, but couldn't do so. Would be helpful, if you mention your thesis statement and whatever you remember.
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Please share your outline and the way you convinced the examiner. I mean, we tried our best, but couldn't do so. Would be helpful, if you mention your thesis statement and whatever you remember.


I got 48

1. Intro
1.1 thesis statement (i dont remember exactly but i wrote headings of outline on my question paper after completing essay)
= Pakistan's biggest issue is governance at moment, albeit it is not a far-fetched dream, With persistent and accurate measures poor govrnc can be eradicated.
2. Causes of poor governance
2.1 corruption
2.2 nepotism
2.3 red-tapism
2.4 stagnant environment
2.5 lack of awareness
2.6 lack of interest of concerned officials
3 Measures of national interest
3.1 accountability
3.2
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Please share your outline and the way you convinced the examiner. I mean, we tried our best, but couldn't do so. Would be helpful, if you mention your thesis statement and whatever you remember.


I got 48. I did not prepare outline of this essay before exams. I gave almost 45 minutes in formatting outline. While writing essay i gave examples of poor governance while writing that portion like dismemberment of east pakistan was due to poor governance, another case was of gujranwala board discrepancy. Overall i was not happy with my essay because when i discussed it with candidates around me after paper, there was much better than mine.

1. Intro
1.1 thesis statement (i dont remember exactly but i wrote headings of outline on my question paper after completing essay)
= Pakistan's biggest issue is governance at moment, albeit it is not a far-fetched dream, With persistent and accurate measures poor govrnc can be eradicated.
2. Causes of poor governance
2.1 corruption
2.2 nepotism
2.3 red-tapism
2.4 stagnant environment
2.5 lack of awareness
2.6 lack of interest of concerned officials
3 Measures of good governance
3.1 accountability
3.2 transparency
3.3 responsiveness
3.4 effective and efficient
3.5 participatory
3.6 equitable
3.7 consensus oriented
3.8 rule of law
4 Present reforms
I wrote about NAB and few committees; i dont rmbr much
5 How to achieve good governance in Pakistan
Again i have not written headings of this portion, but i remember writing about reforms of institutions. Starting with judiciary, law implementation by police, accountability of election process. Etc.
6 conclusion
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40! included charts and what not...
What charts?
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My strategy for writing essay was critical.I discussed common points with different perspective.E.G: i discussed constitutional supremacy in terms of personal identities of leaders,moreover,i discussed political instability in terms of immature behavior of leaders who invited military.Also,i discussed unemployment with comparison of rate during Great depression(1920) which was 10% and we are having 6%.I put simple facts known by everybody so i guess its wrong to say that they need facts but i guess what they need is your point of view which is also literal meaning of essay.I focused on two things:

1.Organization of outline and coherent essay
2.Common points but with "different" dimension.

I took 8 lectures and wrote 3complete essays.I hope I helped.
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The thesis statement was:
Pakistan is heading towards good governance but there are loopholes which ought to be addressed. (i was told to be optimistic)
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What charts?
provincial populations and area and countries that hold less population than punjab
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I got 45

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