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Default Please check Outlines.

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Please check Outlines and pinpoint mistakes. Also, give worthy suggestions for improvement and rate it out of ten.
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Where in your above outline have you mentioned anything regarding heart and its appreciation? Since brain follows heart and both go hand in hand, as it is clearly written in the title where 'they' are appreciated. your outline is fair.
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Where in your above outline have you mentioned anything regarding heart and its appreciation? Since brain follows heart and both go hand in hand, as it is clearly written in the title where 'they' are appreciated. your outline is fair.
Oh. Got it brother.
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So, it means that first I have to shed light on heart and its appreciation, then on its connection with brain, and finally brain and its appreciation. Right?

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Oh. Got it brother.
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So, it means that first I have to shed light on heart and its appreciation, then on its connection with brain, and finally brain and its appreciation. Right?

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never write 'OUTLINES'.Otherwise,you will be penalized. Write outline.
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