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Good governance is the art of running the state so that it can be classified as a welfare state.The aim of good governance is the welfare and development of its people in all spheres of life whether it be social, economic, political and moral etc.The concept of good governance is as old as the early human beings on this earth gather to cooperate with each other to form a union by giving there freedom, for the protection, which they receive from the group while living in it and it become mandatory for the group to help there members and protect there life.This concept has been illustrated in the writings of famous political scientist like Hobbes and John Locke.In the modern world it is sole responsibility of the states to provide their citizens good governance.
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You can make it more attractive and grammatically error free.

It demands more work.
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1st AHMED KHOSO thanks for reply.kindly point out errors.
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The concept of good governance is as old as the early human beings on this earth, who gathered to cooperate with each other to form a union by giving up their(not 'there') freedom, for protection which they would receive from the group while living in it and it become mandatory for the group to help its members and protect their(not 'there' lives
As you requested to point our mistakes, this sentence is way too long and hence contains many grammatical mistakes. Cut the sentence into short sentences and eliminate the possibility of making error. Remember, this whole sentence, if written right, may not gain you marks but a mistake will cost you marks.
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First of all you should be clear headed about what are you writing. And dont try to over think to produce a rather intelligent view. Be simple and genuine. Write in simple narration. I am stressing on simple and easy style because your attempt on essay is laced with too many errors of grammar and structure. When you write a short sentence the problem of a bad structure is unlikely to arise and it appears to the point also.
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