chek the intro+ grammar " where there is a will there is a way".
 

It is one of the most famous phrases in English literature and have a very deep meaning.Will is some thing internal which prevents a person from quiting and keeps telling him do not give up you can do it. It is a well established fact that people who have strong will are able to achieve in life what they wanted e.g. Ibrahim lincon being a son of a lumbar jack was able to became the president of Usa due to his great faith on himself. Yes, we can say that where there is a will there is a way.

[QUOTE=jekhan;992357]It is one of the most famous phrases in English literature and [B]have a very deep meaning[/B].Will is some thing internal which prevents a person from [B]quiting[/B] and [B]keeps telling him do not give up you can do it[/B]. It is a well established fact that people who have strong will are able to achieve in life what[B] they wanted[/B] e.g. [B]Ibrahim lincon being a son of a lumbar jack was able [/B]to became the president of Usa due to his great [B]faith on himself[/B]. Yes, we can say that where there is a will there is a way.[/QUOTE]

[LIST][*]Has a very deep meaning[/LIST][LIST][*]quitting[/LIST][LIST][*]to never give up(and goals are always) achievable[/LIST][LIST][*]they want[/LIST][LIST][*]Ibrahim lincon[B],[/B] being a son of a lumbar jack[B],[/B] was able [*]faith in himself[/LIST]

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Originally Posted by jekhan View Post
It is one of the most famous phrases in English literature [B]and have[/B] a very deep meaning.Will is some thing [B]internal which[/B] prevents a person from [B]quiting and[/B] keeps telling him do not give up you can do it. It is a well established fact that people who have strong will are able to achieve in life what they [B]wanted e.g. [/B][B]Ibrahim lincon[/B] being a son of a lumbar jack was able to became the president of Usa due to his great faith on himself. Yes, we can say that where there is a will there is a way.[LIST][*]and, have[/LIST][LIST][*]quiting, and[/LIST][LIST][*]internal, which[/LIST][LIST][LIST][*]wanted, e.g., Ibrahim Lincoln[/LIST][*]the USA[/LIST]
You used "Will" quite often, try replacing it with synonymous words like desire, passion, etc.

[QUOTE=jekhan;992357]It is one of the most famous phrases in English literature and have a very deep meaning.Will is some thing internal which prevents a person from quiting and keeps telling him do not give up you can do it. It is a well established fact that people who have strong will are able to achieve in life what they wanted e.g. Ibrahim lincon being a son of a lumbar jack was able to became the president of Usa due to his great faith on himself. Yes, we can say that where there is a will there is a way.[/QUOTE]
The sentences are too long. You must avoid using long sentences in order to improve your essay writing.

Seriously.
 

Lol at "ibrahim lincoln" :clap

R.I.P GK.