OUTLINE:
1:Introduction
2:Basic Human Rights
3:Islamic preaching of Human Rights
4:UN Charter of Human Rights Declaration
5:Human Rights Situation in Pakistan
--Prevailing Inequality (Rich_poor gap,Urban Rural Dividend)
--Threat to Life,Security Liberty( Extrajudicial Killing, Illegal Detention, Apathetic Law and order)
--Dwindling Minority Rights ( On independence 23% minority now mere 3%, Poor use of laws against minorities, Little participation in Every Field)
--Gender Gap (ranked 143 out of 144)
--Women as a "Third World Generation"
6:Factors Responsible
--Political Factors
--Administrative
--Social
--Religious
7:How to ameliorate depraved Human Rights
--Through Islamic Teaching and morals
--Effective law with timely justice to every Flash and Blood
--Efficacy of Incumbent Government( Right to information,Rational Policy Designs, Provide Equal participation)
--Winding up inequality
--Eagerness and avidity Of Administrative institutions
8:What Pakistan can achieve by Providing Equal Rights to every Human Being?
9:Conclusion

A little introduction
" To deny People their basic human rights is to challenging their very humanity" (Nelson Mandela). Since her Independence from British Raj,Pakistan is Struggling in economic,political and social grounds. Due to lack of willingness,irrational approaches and ill-timed measurements,she has at her wits end in these insolvent grounds. Human Rights,that upsurge from social ground but if deplorable,hurt the political and economic fields of a country.Pakistan still count in bottom line countries for debarring people from their basic rights.A right to life,freedom,security,justice and equality is still unsatisfactory in Pakistan.

Asslam-0-Alaikum .Seniors, Kindly evaluate my outline and please find every possible flaws in it and suggest me how to rectify it. It will be benevolent. Jazak Allah

Someone please take a look and point out the flaws.Seniors @wellington

In my opinion, you should try to write essay on more specific topics. Like, try writing essay on points number 7 and 8 of your outline.

Moreover, clarity is the essential part of any essay, which is lacking in your introduction; Instead of using long and harsh words, try using short and polite. Also, focus on revising your sentence structure to make it more elegant. (Replace the highlighted words with shorter ones and you would feel the difference)

"To deny People their basic human rights is to challenging their very humanity" (Nelson Mandela). Since her Independence from British Raj,Pakistan is Struggling in economic,political and social grounds. Due to lack of willingness,irrational approaches and ill-timed measurements,she has at her wits end in these insolvent grounds. Human Rights,that upsurge from social ground but if deplorable,hurt the political and economic fields of a country.Pakistan still count in bottom line countries for debarring people from their basic rights.A right to life,freedom,security,justice and equality is still unsatisfactory in Pakistan.

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