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Women Empowerment would empower Pakistan - Kindly check outline
Seniors are requested to check my essay outline and please comment.
1. Introduction 2. Current Scenario of Women in Pakistan and its Impact on Pakistan. 3. Interplay of Women Empowerment and Prosperity of Pakistan. 4. Economic Benefits of Women Empowerment. -----i) Increase in Potential and Diverse Workforce ----ii) Increase in Per-Capita Income ---iii) Broadening of Tax Base 5. Social Benefits of Women Empowerment -----i) Alleviation of Poverty. ----ii) Increase in Literacy rate. ---iii) Alleviation in Incidence of Domestic Violence ---iv) Population Control 6. Political Benefits -----i) Vote Consciousness ----ii) Increase in National Suffrage ---iii) Healthy Political Process ---iv) Legislation of Women related Laws. ----v) Improved Image of Pakistan 7. Conclusion. Introduction: In the history of Pakistan, several social reforms have been undertaken by different regimes. The aim of such reforms have been to strengthen the civil society, harmonize the social fabric of the country and relate the society with the progress of Pakistan. However, devising any meaningful policy to empower women either has been intentionally ignored or is not considered as important and beneficial. It can amply be gauged by the fact that approximately 70% of the Pakistani women have faced some kind of domestic violence once in their life . Moreover, Pakistan has the highest rate of honor killing crimes which reaches to 1400 to 1500 every year. Despite these shocking statistics, the legislature of the country seems paralyzed to legislate anti-violence laws relating to women. Such lack of attention on the issue of women empowerment is also one of the major cause of crisis ridden Pakistan. Weak political culture, population explosion and poverty are some of the manifestations which are cause by a large number of illiterate and unproductive women in the society. ....................................... ....................................... ....................................... Kindly check my outline and introduction. Thanks in advance. |
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Outline is great. Where would you be getting all the data?
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Introduction can be fine tuned a bit. Why are you going with three paragraphs in Intro? A 2500 words research report normally have only one paragraph for intro.
Important of all: Try to answer the essay question in Introduction. The para could be 10 or 12 sentences long. |
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Thanks Ahmed. I developed this outline myself after 45 minutes of brainstorming.
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Are 3, 4 lines enough to explain any point of the outline ? Kindly comment.
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Brother please omit the information in 2nd and 3rd paragraph and discuss these things in 'Analytical Framework', these could be discussed as it is in main body of the essay under relevant section.
In intro always answer the question that in your essay is, 'Women empowerment can empower Pakistan'. So, any editor would like to see how it actually can empower Pakistan. Then rest of Info is for analysis, criticism, your opinion, some facts, solutions by important persons on the subject |
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sheikh87 (Thursday, January 19, 2017) |
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Further, when you say 1500 dies every year, try to qualify that. Who says that? Was it in a book, a report or some government ministry? Such information should always be referenced |
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Some Islamic aspects/rights embodied in the Constitution should also be included to complement the whole Essay
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ok but under which head ? and how would it relate to the topic ?
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