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Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself

Outline:

1. Introduction:

2. Importance of "Today"

3. Connection between today and tomorrow
- The type of seed we sow, today, will produce the same type of fruit tomorrow -

4. Methods to take care of "today" for a better "tomorrow"

a) Staying Optimistic
b) Setting realistic life goals
c) Honesty with one's own self is the best policy
d) Working tirelessly towards achieving goals
e) Positive attitude towards life

5. Consequences of ignoring "today" and worrying unrealistically about future

a) Wasting time and energy
b) Lethargic attitude
c) Wobbly goals
d) No self-control and engaging in useless activities

6) Conclusion


Please seniors, madaaad kardein koi plsss

Assess my essay outline....requestttiing you, all

good going Bhutto. According to me, your outline is good. Try to add some examples to justify your argument, these examples can be from real life observation as well as history. You can put the examples under point number 3.

In point number 4, you can also add that, One should equip oneself of resources that will help in achieving particular goals.

In point number 5 discuss the consequences of ignoring 'today'. Such as, Not taking care of today will lead to a dismal tomorrow and a bleak future. You have just discussed the causes of ignoring today.

Inculcating examples to justify the statement will make your essay stronger.

Thanks mmwaqar, I shall accommodate the mentioned changes in the essay ...Please assess rest of the essays' outline as well following this post :)

[QUOTE=S R Bhutto;1011795]Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself

Outline:

1. Introduction:

2. Importance of "Today"

3. Connection between today and tomorrow
- The type of seed we sow, today, will produce the same type of fruit tomorrow -

4. Methods to take care of "today" for a better "tomorrow"




a) Staying Optimistic
b) Setting realistic life goals
c) Honesty with one's own self is the best policy
d) Working tirelessly towards achieving goals
e) Positive attitude towards life

5. Consequences of ignoring "today" and worrying unrealistically about future

a) Wasting time and energy
b) Lethargic attitude
c) Wobbly goals
d) No self-control and engaging in useless activities

6) Conclusion


Please seniors, madaaad kardein koi plsss

Assess my essay outline....requestttiing you, all[/QUOTE]

Dear Bhutto
Your content of the essay seems to be too individualistic and moralistic. Intrpret the topic in broader perspective such as " Today" can be contemporary economic conditions, present political scenario etc " Tommorow" can be interpreted as future so you can say if today we choose a correct political path, i.e democracy, freedom of speech etc than future of country shall be bright. In this way you give example from past experience of other countries too.

It is an expository topic so you need some historic examples by which you can support your view. Moreover, your topics seems to be too concrete to be exposed for a paragraph.
I would say;
=> Include diversity in your topic, like legal framework, social, political and economic aspects of today which create dynamics for tomorrow
=> give examples from the history which have been turned out to support these words.

[QUOTE=S R Bhutto;1011795]Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself

Outline:

1. Introduction:

2. Importance of "Today"

3. Connection between today and tomorrow
- The type of seed we sow, today, will produce the same type of fruit tomorrow -

4. Methods to take care of "today" for a better "tomorrow"

a) Staying Optimistic
b) Setting realistic life goals
c) Honesty with one's own self is the best policy
d) Working tirelessly towards achieving goals
e) Positive attitude towards life

5. Consequences of ignoring "today" and worrying unrealistically about future

a) Wasting time and energy
b) Lethargic attitude
c) Wobbly goals
d) No self-control and engaging in useless activities

6) Conclusion


Please seniors, madaaad kardein koi plsss

Assess my essay outline....requestttiing you, all[/QUOTE]

Your outline is very generic. In my view, topic is about bringing change in today that will bring stable tomorrow. that "Me" could be an individual, a state , an ideology and world community as a whole. you have to talk about healing the broken systems around us that need attention, and which will eventually take care of themselves in future. it also implies of not sticking to past and cry over it. Coming to the realization that everyone makes mistakes and that they are essential to growth and progress is liberating. you have to combine all of them.

P.S this idea was taken from Bible Matthew verse which suggest to not to worry about future because it is not in your hands, everything has its ways and they all meet an end.

best of Luck!

[QUOTE=S R Bhutto;1011795]Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself

Outline:

1. Introduction:

2. Importance of "Today"

3. Connection between today and tomorrow
- The type of seed we sow, today, will produce the same type of fruit tomorrow -

4. Methods to take care of "today" for a better "tomorrow"

a) Staying Optimistic
b) Setting realistic life goals
c) Honesty with one's own self is the best policy
d) Working tirelessly towards achieving goals
e) Positive attitude towards life

5. Consequences of ignoring "today" and worrying unrealistically about future

a) Wasting time and energy
b) Lethargic attitude
c) Wobbly goals
d) No self-control and engaging in useless activities

6) Conclusion


Please seniors, madaaad kardein koi plsss

Assess my essay outline....requestttiing you, all[/QUOTE]

Its a good outline and is connected to the main point of the topic. If you were able to write such integrated essay in the exam hall, its a great achievement. If you wrote this for practice at home, its still a good attempt. The whole essay revolves around the given topic. Not everyone will interpret the essay in same way that you did but you kept is simple and maintained the link of all points with the essay. I am sure if you write this essay in the paper you will pass the exam. Your essay has coherence and simplicity. Best of luck.

thanks every body for your input. I shall post more content and look forward to your kind responses, please.