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Snrs pls assess Essay : Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself
Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself
Outline: 1. Introduction: 2. Importance of "Today" 3. Connection between today and tomorrow - The type of seed we sow, today, will produce the same type of fruit tomorrow - 4. Methods to take care of "today" for a better "tomorrow" a) Staying Optimistic b) Setting realistic life goals c) Honesty with one's own self is the best policy d) Working tirelessly towards achieving goals e) Positive attitude towards life 5. Consequences of ignoring "today" and worrying unrealistically about future a) Wasting time and energy b) Lethargic attitude c) Wobbly goals d) No self-control and engaging in useless activities 6) Conclusion Please seniors, madaaad kardein koi plsss Assess my essay outline....requestttiing you, all |
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good going Bhutto. According to me, your outline is good. Try to add some examples to justify your argument, these examples can be from real life observation as well as history. You can put the examples under point number 3.
In point number 4, you can also add that, One should equip oneself of resources that will help in achieving particular goals. In point number 5 discuss the consequences of ignoring 'today'. Such as, Not taking care of today will lead to a dismal tomorrow and a bleak future. You have just discussed the causes of ignoring today. Inculcating examples to justify the statement will make your essay stronger. |
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Thanks mmwaqar, I shall accommodate the mentioned changes in the essay ...Please assess rest of the essays' outline as well following this post
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Your content of the essay seems to be too individualistic and moralistic. Intrpret the topic in broader perspective such as " Today" can be contemporary economic conditions, present political scenario etc " Tommorow" can be interpreted as future so you can say if today we choose a correct political path, i.e democracy, freedom of speech etc than future of country shall be bright. In this way you give example from past experience of other countries too. |
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It is an expository topic so you need some historic examples by which you can support your view. Moreover, your topics seems to be too concrete to be exposed for a paragraph.
I would say; => Include diversity in your topic, like legal framework, social, political and economic aspects of today which create dynamics for tomorrow => give examples from the history which have been turned out to support these words. |
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P.S this idea was taken from Bible Matthew verse which suggest to not to worry about future because it is not in your hands, everything has its ways and they all meet an end. best of Luck!
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Women who seek to be equal to men lack ambition. :) |
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There is no one to stop you from succeeding other than yourself |
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thanks every body for your input. I shall post more content and look forward to your kind responses, please.
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